Comment from cat frenette

Excellent

I look forward to each chapter of your story.
One small note - as accurate is it might be in the long run, you might want to look at the sentence about the apple tarte and maybe change it. :)
"Individual bowels or one huge one?"
I look forward to seeing the next chapter.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022

I have changed it. LOL Thank you for the catch.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

"I have question,

perusing (PURSUING)?

I KEPT WAITING TO SEE YOU POST THIS ONE. i SIMPLY LOVE LOVE THIS STORY. Oops! Caps are on but I am too lazy to retype. Forgive me! I am over 100 replies behind and I want to be caught up before I post another story. I at least like to tell people thank you for reading what I write.

This is a feel good story for me, Barbara, and I am enjoying it so much. Keep up the good work. No sixes to give but I would if I could.

Smiles and hugs, Carol

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022

I have made the change, thank you for the catch.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

With your postings on Saturday I can only give you fives's even though you deserve a six. I love the romance developing between Cordero and Alex. Have a great weekend. Shirley

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022

Thank you for the thought. When I finish the other novel, in a few weeks, this one will be posted on Sundays.