Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from BethShelby
I'm enjoying this story. I think Cord likes teasing her about being considered special by everyone and never having been spanked makes her seem a bit spoiled. The first date I ever went on with my husband he teased me about being spoiled because I was an only child.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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I'm enjoying this story. I think Cord likes teasing her about being considered special by everyone and never having been spanked makes her seem a bit spoiled. The first date I ever went on with my husband he teased me about being spoiled because I was an only child.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Ali is an only child too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Love the chapter. I can see and feel the romance progressing. Great job as always. Take care and enjoy the birthday party. Don't worry about us chickens, just relax and enjoy your family. Shirley
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Love the chapter. I can see and feel the romance progressing. Great job as always. Take care and enjoy the birthday party. Don't worry about us chickens, just relax and enjoy your family. Shirley
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm sneaking on the computer, while I wait my turn in the bathroom. LOL
Have a safe trip home tomorrow. Enjoy your day. Shirley
Comment from eliz100
This is another great chapter. You moved the story along nicely. The rattle snake adventure and the almost kiss added some tension to your story. The picture definitely matches the story/
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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This is another great chapter. You moved the story along nicely. The rattle snake adventure and the almost kiss added some tension to your story. The picture definitely matches the story/
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
Scary, adventurous, dreamy and yummy all in the same story. You've hit most of the senses and did it quite well. I am enjoying this story line very much.
Glad to hear you are having a nice time with the family. Enjoy and relax.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Scary, adventurous, dreamy and yummy all in the same story. You've hit most of the senses and did it quite well. I am enjoying this story line very much.
Glad to hear you are having a nice time with the family. Enjoy and relax.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Have a lovely time with your family, Barbara, they are more important. You can post during the week.
I enjoyed reading this part, things are warming up between Cord and Ali, but she is still nervous. Her ex must have been an awful piece of work. I have decided not to come for a visit, I don't do snakes, at all!! Or spiders!! LOL, Well done, my friend. I enjoyed this part. There is a missing word in the sentence below. Other than that, perfect! :)) Sandra xx
Leave (it) to Ali to find one
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Have a lovely time with your family, Barbara, they are more important. You can post during the week.
I enjoyed reading this part, things are warming up between Cord and Ali, but she is still nervous. Her ex must have been an awful piece of work. I have decided not to come for a visit, I don't do snakes, at all!! Or spiders!! LOL, Well done, my friend. I enjoyed this part. There is a missing word in the sentence below. Other than that, perfect! :)) Sandra xx
Leave (it) to Ali to find one
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I have made the corrections. Thank you for the catches.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like and have enjoyed the read of this pleasant and straightforward romantic actions and interpretations with emotionally expressive chapter with a question if there is any way to mend the broken heart; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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I like and have enjoyed the read of this pleasant and straightforward romantic actions and interpretations with emotionally expressive chapter with a question if there is any way to mend the broken heart; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.