A Nation of Character
Turn away from hate, America!28 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is excellent dramatic verbage and imagery. It is also a message of a cautionary tale: "By contrast, America is a troubled place right now, alarming really." I heard a speaker say when asked why is there so much hater, He said it's always been contained, but like Chernobyl it has erupted. It's always been secretly simmering. Look at the history of the Native Americans, the blacks. There was bloodshed on the Catholic church steps if an Italian went to the Irish church & visa versa. As with you, I could go on ad infinitem. Quite a topic for the assignment.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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This is excellent dramatic verbage and imagery. It is also a message of a cautionary tale: "By contrast, America is a troubled place right now, alarming really." I heard a speaker say when asked why is there so much hater, He said it's always been contained, but like Chernobyl it has erupted. It's always been secretly simmering. Look at the history of the Native Americans, the blacks. There was bloodshed on the Catholic church steps if an Italian went to the Irish church & visa versa. As with you, I could go on ad infinitem. Quite a topic for the assignment.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments, dear Liz. I always appreciate what you have to say. Thank you for feeling free to share. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've made an excellent case describing "Where America is Going", Sally. I agree that hate for other human beings is the biggest cause of troubled waters, in the United States, in Canada, and around the world. Although slavery was long ago abolished in both the US and Canada, it has been replaced with "human trafficking", as mentioned further down in the article that you quoted. The whole world is a sad place these days. Thanks for all of your research. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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You've made an excellent case describing "Where America is Going", Sally. I agree that hate for other human beings is the biggest cause of troubled waters, in the United States, in Canada, and around the world. Although slavery was long ago abolished in both the US and Canada, it has been replaced with "human trafficking", as mentioned further down in the article that you quoted. The whole world is a sad place these days. Thanks for all of your research. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. Human trafficking is illegal and is a difficult breed of cat, also tied into other crimes: prostitution, drug trafficking, and illegal arms sales. The abducted, some sold, some not, and they are moved very quickly and intercontinentally. It is slavery, no doubt, by I?d say more of a criminal enterprise. The statistics are hidden within government bureaucracy. It?s something I would like to report on in the days ahead. Today, I did not have anything verified in this arena of human trafficking. The Walk Free group has a credible report and ongoing ministry. They do good work. I have two former missionaries in my family, both whom have shared their world view on slavery and oppression. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The first time I slavery in my life was not here in America but in Tangier Morocco. As I was walking around, already warned not to be by myself because many white women go missing everyday, I was a white slave market. White people were up on a cement stage in chains being auctioned off. We are all God's children. He created us. I pray daily for the US. I am worried for what is becoming of America. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The first time I slavery in my life was not here in America but in Tangier Morocco. As I was walking around, already warned not to be by myself because many white women go missing everyday, I was a white slave market. White people were up on a cement stage in chains being auctioned off. We are all God's children. He created us. I pray daily for the US. I am worried for what is becoming of America. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the insightful review and personal comments. My middle son was a missionary to China and slavery does exist there in every form imaginable. He finally left after the Chinese government emptied his bank account. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Ric Myworld
What an outstanding piece of writing with all its hard work and research. I'm almost ashamed to give it a measly five when even a six couldn't touch the reward it deserves. But, as usual, I'm out of sixes. I almost keep it around until Sunday when my stock is replenished, but realized my six won't make that much difference. Bravo!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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What an outstanding piece of writing with all its hard work and research. I'm almost ashamed to give it a measly five when even a six couldn't touch the reward it deserves. But, as usual, I'm out of sixes. I almost keep it around until Sunday when my stock is replenished, but realized my six won't make that much difference. Bravo!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful comments. Your support in my work, all of it, means so much. Blessings always, dear Ric,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
You have some profound thoughts and ideas included in your essay. You have included truths that fill the world and makes it less safe and less desirable. I commend you for pointing out many of the fractures in society and suggesting ways to change the direction of our culture.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
PAL Z
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Hello Sal.
You have some profound thoughts and ideas included in your essay. You have included truths that fill the world and makes it less safe and less desirable. I commend you for pointing out many of the fractures in society and suggesting ways to change the direction of our culture.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
PAL Z
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and generous stars. I know we share much in common in this issue. Thank you again for the lovely review and an extra measure of support. Sending along my very best to you and yours always, Sally :))
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I am a bit confused by this one. Yes, I agree racism is bad and yes, it has manifested all over the word and still exist today. Yes, slavery is wrong and still is practiced around the world. Your historic references show this. I get the God angle too. So, the question is: Where is America going?
And the answer is___________.
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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Hmm, I am a bit confused by this one. Yes, I agree racism is bad and yes, it has manifested all over the word and still exist today. Yes, slavery is wrong and still is practiced around the world. Your historic references show this. I get the God angle too. So, the question is: Where is America going?
And the answer is___________.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2021
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I thank you for your excellent review and the kind stars. I left it open to interpretation although it's obvious we are doomed unless we turn away from this hateful course. I'm a war historian and keep my family's ancestry, so I see history repeating itself if not learned from. Again, I'm hoping we will turn around and quickly. Blessings to you and your family always,
Sally :))
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Commentary and Philosophy essay non-fiction speaks today's state of character of America as a nation, historically, expressively and informatively this mentions how awful and losing decisions are being taken these days in all terms of a living state in a developed nation; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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This Commentary and Philosophy essay non-fiction speaks today's state of character of America as a nation, historically, expressively and informatively this mentions how awful and losing decisions are being taken these days in all terms of a living state in a developed nation; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind words. It is most appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally :))
Comment from damommy
Very powerful, Sally! Beautifully written, and I know you write from your heart. I agree with you all the way. Color has never been a problem for me. I decide on the individual. This piece needs to be sent to newspapers everywhere to be published. Sent it to the editors of every paper you can.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Very powerful, Sally! Beautifully written, and I know you write from your heart. I agree with you all the way. Color has never been a problem for me. I decide on the individual. This piece needs to be sent to newspapers everywhere to be published. Sent it to the editors of every paper you can.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, dear Yvonne. I?m so honored by this. I appreciate your support and for standing with me. It means so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs