Memories of Mastery
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "On Forever's Seas"Tributes and Reviews
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Comment from Senyai
Hi Miss Merri,
Your verse is truly beautiful, my friend! So full of perfect images and meaning for a most honorable man. Bob will be sorely missed by all on FanStory and his family.
Yes, I knew Bob had a difficult childhood in the foster care system that leaves much to be desired. His book, Falling Up the Stairs is a fictionalized account of that time and I intend to read it in his honor, if it is available in his portfolio or Amazon, which I believe someone said it is.
Your sweet and gentle verse to Mastery (Bob Hartson) is so lovely and full of hope as you send him off to sail the Forever Seas with wonderful words that tell of his struggles and accomplishments in his life. The love he sent out tirelessly, he received back ten fold.
All the best, MissMerri :-))
Senyai
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Hi Miss Merri,
Your verse is truly beautiful, my friend! So full of perfect images and meaning for a most honorable man. Bob will be sorely missed by all on FanStory and his family.
Yes, I knew Bob had a difficult childhood in the foster care system that leaves much to be desired. His book, Falling Up the Stairs is a fictionalized account of that time and I intend to read it in his honor, if it is available in his portfolio or Amazon, which I believe someone said it is.
Your sweet and gentle verse to Mastery (Bob Hartson) is so lovely and full of hope as you send him off to sail the Forever Seas with wonderful words that tell of his struggles and accomplishments in his life. The love he sent out tirelessly, he received back ten fold.
All the best, MissMerri :-))
Senyai
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this kind review Senyai. I appreciate it so much. MM
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You are very welcome, MissMerri :))
Comment from Badger_29
This is perfect in composition and I love the rhyme scheme. I like how you told the story of someone who is selfless, and touched the lives of those that he did so deeply.
I like how you said that in the ring with his voice~
Very nice tribute and acknowledgment of your friend.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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This is perfect in composition and I love the rhyme scheme. I like how you told the story of someone who is selfless, and touched the lives of those that he did so deeply.
I like how you said that in the ring with his voice~
Very nice tribute and acknowledgment of your friend.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Darren
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review Darren, and congratulations for having your poem selected as a candidate for POM! I was so pleased to see that! Thank you for granting this poem six stars. How nice you are! MM
Comment from Sankey
An excellent tribute to a very dear and log time FS friend and helper, Bob Hartson(Mastery.) We will certainly all miss him and his great novels and writing and helps. Your poem pointed to a lot of things we all knew about Bob in the loss of his son and some of the hard rows he had to hoe. God Bless.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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An excellent tribute to a very dear and log time FS friend and helper, Bob Hartson(Mastery.) We will certainly all miss him and his great novels and writing and helps. Your poem pointed to a lot of things we all knew about Bob in the loss of his son and some of the hard rows he had to hoe. God Bless.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you for reviewing this and for your understanding comments. I appreciate it very much. MM
Comment from amahra
This is a wonderful tribute to a very talented and kind man. Your poem captured glimpses of his artistry and fine character. And the artwork you chose was simply stunning. Great job!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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This is a wonderful tribute to a very talented and kind man. Your poem captured glimpses of his artistry and fine character. And the artwork you chose was simply stunning. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you for your kind words amahra. I'm glad you liked this chapter in the book for Mastery. MM
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You obviously know this Fanstory friend very well and your tribute to him is warm and endearing and a joy to read, a fine contribution to the book, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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You obviously know this Fanstory friend very well and your tribute to him is warm and endearing and a joy to read, a fine contribution to the book, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thanks Dolly. I met Bob soon after I joined FanStory in 2009, so we had many exchanges over the years. The first thing of his I read were the chapters that became his book, "Falling up the Stairs." I was impressed with how he dealt with sorrow and hardship. Glad you read this. Thank you for the review. MM
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello MM, what a lovely tribute you have written about Bob. The lovely rhythms that flow throughout each line make me feel the rise and swell of the sea. You honor him with your wonderful words.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Hello MM, what a lovely tribute you have written about Bob. The lovely rhythms that flow throughout each line make me feel the rise and swell of the sea. You honor him with your wonderful words.
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much Melissa. I'm honored by your comments. MM
Comment from Wendy G
Such a beautiful image which ties in well with your lovely poem. Bob has made a lasting impression on everyone who knew him, and this poem will bring much joy to his family, highlighting as it does his courage, perseverance, and kind nature. Precious memories of him will last. Well written.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Such a beautiful image which ties in well with your lovely poem. Bob has made a lasting impression on everyone who knew him, and this poem will bring much joy to his family, highlighting as it does his courage, perseverance, and kind nature. Precious memories of him will last. Well written.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely comments Wendy... and I hope his family is blessed by this book and the many people who knew and appreciated Bob. MM
Comment from judiverse
Yes, Bob had so many challenges to face in life, and then his last illness. I read his Cleve novels and "Falling Up the Stairs." He was so talented. As you write, he was kind and encouraging in his reviews. Your poem really does justice to him. "On Forever's Seas" is a lovely thought about Bob. He was such a tremendous influence on FS. judi
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Yes, Bob had so many challenges to face in life, and then his last illness. I read his Cleve novels and "Falling Up the Stairs." He was so talented. As you write, he was kind and encouraging in his reviews. Your poem really does justice to him. "On Forever's Seas" is a lovely thought about Bob. He was such a tremendous influence on FS. judi
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much for what you said Judi. I feel like another gaping hole has been left in our FanStory family. He was one of the first members I met here. MM
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You're very welcome. I believe he was on FS for 16 years. He certainly made the most of his time here. jufi
Comment from irishauthorme
In bereavement we seek comfort in recalling the lifetime accomplishments of our lost one and in the devotionals we write. This beautiful poem, devoted to a long time friend, is not only appreciated by all of us, still imprisoned in this life, but also by our departed friend, as the soul never dies, but gains eternal life through the sacrifice of our Saviour, Jesus Christ.
Forever's seas, a peaceful ocean where we sail into the sunset, light fading, sails taut in the rising evening breeze, flying fish jumping ahead of the nodding bow. A new moon rising to light our way, the Southern Cross guiding our course.
Great Memorial.
irish
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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In bereavement we seek comfort in recalling the lifetime accomplishments of our lost one and in the devotionals we write. This beautiful poem, devoted to a long time friend, is not only appreciated by all of us, still imprisoned in this life, but also by our departed friend, as the soul never dies, but gains eternal life through the sacrifice of our Saviour, Jesus Christ.
Forever's seas, a peaceful ocean where we sail into the sunset, light fading, sails taut in the rising evening breeze, flying fish jumping ahead of the nodding bow. A new moon rising to light our way, the Southern Cross guiding our course.
Great Memorial.
irish
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and poetic comments Irish. You paint such lovely pictures with your words. Thanks too, for granting a six to this effort. I appreciate that more than you may realize. They don't come too often. MM
Comment from QC Poet
Fond memories shared here and An excellent tribute to a dear passed friend who left enduring memories with you. Thanks for Sharing your work and poetry.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Fond memories shared here and An excellent tribute to a dear passed friend who left enduring memories with you. Thanks for Sharing your work and poetry.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you QC, for reading and reviewing this poem. I am glad you thought it was acceptable. MM