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Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, thank you for sharing your uplifting and yet heartbreaking story with me. You told it with dignity and panache. You took control after your husband passed, and threw your life into Fan Story. As it helped you to have a purpose, instead of just existing, you gave yourself a new life and new goals to write and enjoy life again. Kudos to you and your new life with Fan Story and yourself!
Thanks, again, for sharing your true story with all of us here at Fan Story.
Have a great and wonderful day, my friend,
Jesse
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Wow, thank you for sharing your uplifting and yet heartbreaking story with me. You told it with dignity and panache. You took control after your husband passed, and threw your life into Fan Story. As it helped you to have a purpose, instead of just existing, you gave yourself a new life and new goals to write and enjoy life again. Kudos to you and your new life with Fan Story and yourself!
Thanks, again, for sharing your true story with all of us here at Fan Story.
Have a great and wonderful day, my friend,
Jesse
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Good morning, Jesse. Thank you for your wonderful and kind review. I hope I didn't come across as "preachy" because that was never intended. My writing frees me, and if I must start again... I would love to do it with joy. Smiles, Carol
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Hi Carol. You didn't come across as preachy at all! I am happy that Fan Story has brought you so much joy and companionship with other writers.
The fact that your writing frees you is a wonderful thing to behold.
Have a great day, my friend,
Jesse
Comment from Sally Law
And we are all so glad that you did! A six for this marvelous, heartfelt piece. Your story has given many the courage to begin again, I think.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the contest, dear Carol.
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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And we are all so glad that you did! A six for this marvelous, heartfelt piece. Your story has given many the courage to begin again, I think.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the contest, dear Carol.
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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thank you, Sally. I have struggled with the emptiness... It's strange because I still felt my faith was strong, I just felt something was missing. I believe my writing is meant to fill that space along with my memories. I am thrilled we have become friends. Your glittering stars have added sunshine to my day. Smiles, Carol
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I love to add sunshine. Be blessed! Your friend always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Leann DS
There is so much in your story to which I can relate. a cross road and not knowing which way to go, or if to go at all... Choosing to write to release emotions that are too difficult to face without first filtering them from heart to brain to pen to hand... I seem that I often use writing when things in life are very difficult, and it really is helpful. It helps me to process my emotions and to release them so I can get to a point of acceptance.
Your story was written in a way that many people will be able to relate. Well done. Hugs.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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There is so much in your story to which I can relate. a cross road and not knowing which way to go, or if to go at all... Choosing to write to release emotions that are too difficult to face without first filtering them from heart to brain to pen to hand... I seem that I often use writing when things in life are very difficult, and it really is helpful. It helps me to process my emotions and to release them so I can get to a point of acceptance.
Your story was written in a way that many people will be able to relate. Well done. Hugs.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Good morning, Leann... It was strange when I came across your memoir yesterday because I was in the middle of writing this one. I saw so much of me and my life entwined in your words and emotions. I feel like we were meant to connect. I hope that my thoughts and emotions don't come off as "preaching" because they definitely aren't meant for that. I just feel that returning to writing is a "gift" for doing more than what was expected... for doing the right thing. Hope that makes sense. Thank you for the lovely words, your friendship and the stars. My day is glittering with happiness. Smiles, Carol
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Your words do not come across as preachy at all! To me, they are just relatable and honest and true. I felt the same kind of connection with you, and our experiences are different, but the sentiments are the same. I believe that Jesus brings people together for a reason. I don't claim to know why we are connecting, but I am going to enjoy and value this friendship that I feel with you. Hugs.
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Smiles and hugs across the miles and to your heart
Comment from royowen
All the time from when I started to write till now, I never doubted my ability to write, and capture others in my slipstream, I was No1 poet last year, and never really been further back than three, except for two sabbatical years, this being one of them, I write really for my children/grandchildren creating a legacy and chronicle to God. And so I identify with your, I've lost many friends and family. Beautifully written and bravely so, thanks for sharing Carol, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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All the time from when I started to write till now, I never doubted my ability to write, and capture others in my slipstream, I was No1 poet last year, and never really been further back than three, except for two sabbatical years, this being one of them, I write really for my children/grandchildren creating a legacy and chronicle to God. And so I identify with your, I've lost many friends and family. Beautifully written and bravely so, thanks for sharing Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Good morning, Roy. While I was writing this and a few of my other recent stories, I wondered if I was "preaching" (which definitely isn't my place) but I couldn't stop myself. I actually felt different. Something lifted from me (like I received permission) to become me, the writer, again. My faith is me... I don't mean to impose on others, but I just felt it was right to share. Thank you for always being there with your thoughts and encouragement. I consider you one of the good guys...my friend. Smiles, Carol
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I was enthralled Carol.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Biographical Non-Fiction speaks experiences, tales, true feeling about relation of beloved, energy to work to the cause, appreciation of problems inevitably to work anew (begin again) and get the success, value and essence of faith in God, for you know gracious God gifts you the mountain, only work confidently and find colours; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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This Biographical Non-Fiction speaks experiences, tales, true feeling about relation of beloved, energy to work to the cause, appreciation of problems inevitably to work anew (begin again) and get the success, value and essence of faith in God, for you know gracious God gifts you the mountain, only work confidently and find colours; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Good morning and thank you for stopping by to read my story. I believe without meaning to "preach" that God set me on this path, and I hope I have done him justice. Now, I have the freedom to find me again and once again share with others. Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
You did well when you chose as you moniker Began Again. You've had more than one mountain in your life. I had the love of my life for sixty-one and I know I'll see him again. I'd now written for long time when he passed awatm but almost two years later, I realized that was what I had to do to get my life back and I've never regretted it. I think you climbed that mountain.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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You did well when you chose as you moniker Began Again. You've had more than one mountain in your life. I had the love of my life for sixty-one and I know I'll see him again. I'd now written for long time when he passed awatm but almost two years later, I realized that was what I had to do to get my life back and I've never regretted it. I think you climbed that mountain.
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Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Good morning, Beth... We both have walked some rocky roads. I am thrilled you found yourself and now I believe I am finding me. I also hope my writing doesn't come off as "preaching" because that's not where I want to be coming from... I just want to be me, my faith, my thoughts, myself until it's my time to say goodbye. My entire life has always been to do what others wanted or needed. Now it's time to do what I believe is my calling. Have a great day! Smiles, Carol