Football - A Novel
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello barbara.wilkey
I liked reading when Gabriel and Katherine talked about her boys.
I noticed that Gabriel is finding things to help Katherine around the house. Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Hello barbara.wilkey
I liked reading when Gabriel and Katherine talked about her boys.
I noticed that Gabriel is finding things to help Katherine around the house. Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind revie.
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You are so welcome Barb
Comment from lancellot
Very well written. Everything in this chapter is in keeping with the world you've built for these characters. Jordan is speaking and acting in accordance with the environment the story is written in, and so is the Coach.
Well done
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Very well written. Everything in this chapter is in keeping with the world you've built for these characters. Jordan is speaking and acting in accordance with the environment the story is written in, and so is the Coach.
Well done
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Another lovely chapter. Always a pleasure reading your stuff and so glad someone has made it possible for me to stay. Good reading just one spag. We've spent a lot (of)time together.
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Another lovely chapter. Always a pleasure reading your stuff and so glad someone has made it possible for me to stay. Good reading just one spag. We've spent a lot (of)time together.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the catch. I will fix it.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great new continuation to your story. So Katherine sees something else in Gabriel other than just being into sport. Do I detect a budding romance here? Well, time will tell. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Hi Barbara, this is a great new continuation to your story. So Katherine sees something else in Gabriel other than just being into sport. Do I detect a budding romance here? Well, time will tell. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I am wondering about the budding romance myself. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Katherine is finding out that Gabriel isn't all jock, he has a decided soft side too, and like guys involved in sport, (like me) realise that physical abilities wane, and then what have you got left? So something drastic has to happen, with me, God intervened in my life. Well done, excellent episode Barbara, blessings Roy
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Katherine is finding out that Gabriel isn't all jock, he has a decided soft side too, and like guys involved in sport, (like me) realise that physical abilities wane, and then what have you got left? So something drastic has to happen, with me, God intervened in my life. Well done, excellent episode Barbara, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the catch and the kind review.
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Most welcome Barbara,