Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Football Chapter 2 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from seaglass
Story is moving on nicely. I had to wonder why a Harvard man would not want his wife educated but there are all kinds of men. So now, the tension will tighten as these two work together.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Story is moving on nicely. I had to wonder why a Harvard man would not want his wife educated but there are all kinds of men. So now, the tension will tighten as these two work together.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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More will be revealed about George later. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
I enjoyed reading this part of your book. It is interesting and keeps me wanting to read. The picture matches the story. I look forward to reading the next segment.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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I enjoyed reading this part of your book. It is interesting and keeps me wanting to read. The picture matches the story. I look forward to reading the next segment.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a quite different from your other stories, but it seems like it is off to a great start and I know I'm going ot enjoy reading it. Being a teacher yourself I would think you'd have some interesting experiences to draw on.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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This is a quite different from your other stories, but it seems like it is off to a great start and I know I'm going ot enjoy reading it. Being a teacher yourself I would think you'd have some interesting experiences to draw on.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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I'm worried about this one, because it's not what I usually write. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Beautiful post. So the hero is the football coach in the same school. Her story is quite interesting and Ilike her a lot quite smart and brave too.I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Beautiful post. So the hero is the football coach in the same school. Her story is quite interesting and Ilike her a lot quite smart and brave too.I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
This is going to be a tricky situation if the guy Kate keeps running into is the coach, Gabe Hudson. How can they maintain a professional relationship is there are personal feelings involved. Already Gabe is questioning whether she can maintain discipline. Paul explains Kate's background to Gabe. Maybe that will make an impression on him. It was quite an achievement on her part to get her college degree while having all those family responsibilities. She would do well to distance herself from him. As she's starting a new job, she doesn't need any distractions. Just my thought--she'd do well to look elsewhere for a romantic interest. I'll be curious to see how you work it out. judi
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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This is going to be a tricky situation if the guy Kate keeps running into is the coach, Gabe Hudson. How can they maintain a professional relationship is there are personal feelings involved. Already Gabe is questioning whether she can maintain discipline. Paul explains Kate's background to Gabe. Maybe that will make an impression on him. It was quite an achievement on her part to get her college degree while having all those family responsibilities. She would do well to distance herself from him. As she's starting a new job, she doesn't need any distractions. Just my thought--she'd do well to look elsewhere for a romantic interest. I'll be curious to see how you work it out. judi
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2020
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This entire thing is a HOT MESS and gets worse. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. He seems a abit of a male chauvinist to boot. judi
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He is, but is working on it. LOL
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I hope he doesn't try to undermine Kate as she starts her new job. She should keep her distance and ignore him. judi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Ah, so now we know. Her husband, although very clever, didn't want his wife to shine, it obviously wasn't a great marriage. Now she has four children, I think there is going to be a romance soon between these two. Excellent again, my friend. Enjoy your trip and take care. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Ah, so now we know. Her husband, although very clever, didn't want his wife to shine, it obviously wasn't a great marriage. Now she has four children, I think there is going to be a romance soon between these two. Excellent again, my friend. Enjoy your trip and take care. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb (barbara.wilkey )
Katherine is introduced to the gentleman. Now that will be something I would like to read!
This chapter in your book Football -
Football Chapter 2 part 1
I like how you are gradually coming to the time that Katherine will find romance.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Hello Barb (barbara.wilkey )
Katherine is introduced to the gentleman. Now that will be something I would like to read!
This chapter in your book Football -
Football Chapter 2 part 1
I like how you are gradually coming to the time that Katherine will find romance.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the support.
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You are welcome Barb
barbara.wilkey
Gert
Comment from royowen
I've always liked your articulate and human stories Barbara. You have easy to relate to, and agreeable protagonists and feisty females and nice, tough, but worthy males, and they all love dogs, something that I believe, you do too. Great encounter to set the basis for your story, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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I've always liked your articulate and human stories Barbara. You have easy to relate to, and agreeable protagonists and feisty females and nice, tough, but worthy males, and they all love dogs, something that I believe, you do too. Great encounter to set the basis for your story, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome Barbara
Comment from Sally Law
Super chapter, dear Barbara. It looks like fate has a hand in this and Katherine just might like men again. Love can be very healing. I look forward to the next,
Sal XOs...xo...
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Super chapter, dear Barbara. It looks like fate has a hand in this and Katherine just might like men again. Love can be very healing. I look forward to the next,
Sal XOs...xo...
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Victoria? Drove Greyhound through that part years ago. During the time it was mostly desert. Hope you guys have a great trip.
Another one starting out good. Look out Romance here it comes.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Victoria? Drove Greyhound through that part years ago. During the time it was mostly desert. Hope you guys have a great trip.
Another one starting out good. Look out Romance here it comes.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.