Maiden Flight
It's definitely not National Geographic...18 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, I'm happy the chipmunk wasn't hurt, Mystery Author, regardless of the fact of being a nuisance. Your contest entry reads well. The picture is great. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Well, I'm happy the chipmunk wasn't hurt, Mystery Author, regardless of the fact of being a nuisance. Your contest entry reads well. The picture is great. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for sharing your story of "the great white hunter"! I did not realize that chipmunks were such a nuisance, especially since they are rather cute! Best wishes in the 100 Word Flash contest and happy weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks for sharing your story of "the great white hunter"! I did not realize that chipmunks were such a nuisance, especially since they are rather cute! Best wishes in the 100 Word Flash contest and happy weekend- Joan
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image and good story.
-I had to laugh because
we have had chipmunks do
the same thing; they would
actually climb up the
drain pipes, and would
make a big racket doing it.
-The description is very good,
but I'm not sure about the
chipmunk not coming back:)
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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-Great image and good story.
-I had to laugh because
we have had chipmunks do
the same thing; they would
actually climb up the
drain pipes, and would
make a big racket doing it.
-The description is very good,
but I'm not sure about the
chipmunk not coming back:)
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Lol! Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bichon
Oh no, the poor little chipmunk, haha. Thankfully we don't really get there over where I am. Your story did illustrate the comedic values of the encounter though, great work.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Oh no, the poor little chipmunk, haha. Thankfully we don't really get there over where I am. Your story did illustrate the comedic values of the encounter though, great work.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
A good entry for the contest and a fun one as well! Indeed, when any particular animal infests an area then it can be difficult for the inhabitants! But can be fun as well if those things are really cute ;-)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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A good entry for the contest and a fun one as well! Indeed, when any particular animal infests an area then it can be difficult for the inhabitants! But can be fun as well if those things are really cute ;-)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
That's one way to get rid of a chipmunk. This is a funny flash fiction story. I was amused by the image of the chipmunk flying out of the downspout. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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That's one way to get rid of a chipmunk. This is a funny flash fiction story. I was amused by the image of the chipmunk flying out of the downspout. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love chipmunks, but also I understand that they can damage your house pretty well. My friend husband, always had a fight with them because they were destroying the roof. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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I love chipmunks, but also I understand that they can damage your house pretty well. My friend husband, always had a fight with them because they were destroying the roof. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear author, This entry deserves a delightful rating!
I often wish that we could rate entries by our emotional reaction to the work, rather than just rate it for competence And neatness of writing skills.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Dear author, This entry deserves a delightful rating!
I often wish that we could rate entries by our emotional reaction to the work, rather than just rate it for competence And neatness of writing skills.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review!