The Streaker
100 word Flash Fiction17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, a little boy running off after his bath. I love it. My little son would run in the garden when he was 2 years old, totally naked. Little monkey. I loved this one, it was light and fun. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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LOL, a little boy running off after his bath. I love it. My little son would run in the garden when he was 2 years old, totally naked. Little monkey. I loved this one, it was light and fun. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you Sandra for your encouraging review and understanding of little ones. This was my first Flash Fiction story and I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Bichon
Even though it was short, your story had comedic value and expressed the aspect of childish innocence quite well. I wish the best of luck for you in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Even though it was short, your story had comedic value and expressed the aspect of childish innocence quite well. I wish the best of luck for you in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. This was my first Flash Fiction story and I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from L. R. Jensen
Such a funny piece! I could just picture the horrified neighbors and the carefree Billy.
This was well written and entertaining. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Such a funny piece! I could just picture the horrified neighbors and the carefree Billy.
This was well written and entertaining. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. This was my first Flash Fiction story and I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
Too cute. I thought it was a full grown man but instead it was a little boy. I enjoyed this story. Great job and best of luck in the contest. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Too cute. I thought it was a full grown man but instead it was a little boy. I enjoyed this story. Great job and best of luck in the contest. Have a great day.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you Natalie for your thoughtful and encouraging review. This was my first Flash Fiction story and I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dkblack
This took me back several years to when 'streaking' was the in-thing to do. I never did it! I do know a few people, as high school students, who did. A naked youngster on the loose is a more common thing! I enjoyed your well-written story.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This took me back several years to when 'streaking' was the in-thing to do. I never did it! I do know a few people, as high school students, who did. A naked youngster on the loose is a more common thing! I enjoyed your well-written story.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. This was my first Flash Fiction story and I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge.
Yes - streaking was the rage back in the '70s. (or so I've heard :)))
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, those little boys... they never, ever want to put on their clothes after a bath!! :) A fun offering for the Flash contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Oh, those little boys... they never, ever want to put on their clothes after a bath!! :) A fun offering for the Flash contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
mother to death". --> mother to death."
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. This was my first Flash Fiction story and I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge.
Blessings
Janet
PS thank you for the kind correction. :)))
Comment from Tami Urbanek
LOL!! Would police arrive due to a child running around naked? That was funny though. By having the police arrive insinuated it was a grown person-so in that regard it was great!
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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LOL!! Would police arrive due to a child running around naked? That was funny though. By having the police arrive insinuated it was a grown person-so in that regard it was great!
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you Tami for your thoughtful and encouraging review. This was my first Flash Fiction story and I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge.
Blessings
Janet