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Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Soul Writer "A collection of stories: Some True, some not
23 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
A good description of the soul as embodied by the all Powerful, the great I Am.
A couple of punctuation suggestions:
He so love's. (loves)
the shackles of the Devils hold. (Devil's)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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A good description of the soul as embodied by the all Powerful, the great I Am.
A couple of punctuation suggestions:
He so love's. (loves)
the shackles of the Devils hold. (Devil's)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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You are so kind to see some imperfections that needed addressed, thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I like this entry for the Soul Writer contest.
Your piece is well written and carries a strong message.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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I like this entry for the Soul Writer contest.
Your piece is well written and carries a strong message.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Sharon, thank you!
Comment from Pam Norris
Beautifully written, this is a wonderful description of how you see your soul. It creates imagery as I read it. The picture you selected matches perfectly.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Beautifully written, this is a wonderful description of how you see your soul. It creates imagery as I read it. The picture you selected matches perfectly.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Pam Norris, thank you!
Comment from Rikki66
The soul makes a human. According to a story, I read, a body was weighed at the time of death, the soul weighed 1/16 of a gram.
Rikki***************************************************************
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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The soul makes a human. According to a story, I read, a body was weighed at the time of death, the soul weighed 1/16 of a gram.
Rikki***************************************************************
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Rikki, I believe that absolutely!
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Blessings.
Rikki
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I could never have written anything anywhere near as good as this to define the soul. It is excellent! We all have our own ideas as to what our soul should be, but to actually describe it, put it into words, well, that is something else. Well done, and good luck in the contest with this remarkable contest entry. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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I could never have written anything anywhere near as good as this to define the soul. It is excellent! We all have our own ideas as to what our soul should be, but to actually describe it, put it into words, well, that is something else. Well done, and good luck in the contest with this remarkable contest entry. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Sandra, I am humbled by your review and comments, thank you, pales to the gratitude I feel
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
One typo of note: "all it right" the it should be is.
I thoroughly enjoyed and appreciated your take on the soul. It was an inspiring and beautiful poem. I thought your rhyming was a special touch! Thanks for this uplifting piece!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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One typo of note: "all it right" the it should be is.
I thoroughly enjoyed and appreciated your take on the soul. It was an inspiring and beautiful poem. I thought your rhyming was a special touch! Thanks for this uplifting piece!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Marilyn, thank you and also for seeing my goofy mistake. I am humbled by your wonderful rating and review.
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So welcome!!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written post you have penned for the Soul Writer writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words that I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Without God we would not have been made at all. Everything He did was good. Our soul is something that helps us to feel His love and presence. Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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This is a very well written post you have penned for the Soul Writer writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words that I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Without God we would not have been made at all. Everything He did was good. Our soul is something that helps us to feel His love and presence. Thanks for sharing! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Teri, thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The font choice is effective.
-A very good opening verse
that catches our attention.
-I like this line:
"Thus, my soul is unencumbered to write"
-You effectively take the
reader back to the beginning
with "breathing space" at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The font choice is effective.
-A very good opening verse
that catches our attention.
-I like this line:
"Thus, my soul is unencumbered to write"
-You effectively take the
reader back to the beginning
with "breathing space" at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Pam, thank you. It was a joy to write this one.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, Happy Tuesday to you. I enjoyed your poem, I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme of it and the words, so heartfelt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Hello fellow poet, Happy Tuesday to you. I enjoyed your poem, I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme of it and the words, so heartfelt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Happy Tuesday back to a good friend! Enjoy the remainder of your week.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Soul Writer is a Soul Writer Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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"Soul Writer is a Soul Writer Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind words.