Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

I like the way you described how Cidda wheedled her way into your life. I think there needs to be an element of bonding and she has certainly done that with you

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review. There was definitely going to be some kind of bonding, whether I wanted it or not lol