Lessons in the Key of Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Finale, Act One"A music and dance teacher's improvization
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Comment from A. Willow Bends
I love it that when you see an opportunity you jump on it and you convey it so well in your writing. Are you planning to put this book out there for those who need to consider OTHER paths when their too lofty goals are out of reach? I hope so. Certainly you could find a publisher for this type book?
It is my understanding that most of the publishing companies in our country have been bought up by German publishing companies, but maybe you could start jotting down publishing companies of every book you read and start keeping a log of them, just in case?????
Great job, as usual, my friend.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I love it that when you see an opportunity you jump on it and you convey it so well in your writing. Are you planning to put this book out there for those who need to consider OTHER paths when their too lofty goals are out of reach? I hope so. Certainly you could find a publisher for this type book?
It is my understanding that most of the publishing companies in our country have been bought up by German publishing companies, but maybe you could start jotting down publishing companies of every book you read and start keeping a log of them, just in case?????
Great job, as usual, my friend.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Good suggestion, Wendy. Thank you.
And thanks for this nice review, as well. xo
Comment from 24chas
Your story is so fascinating, Rachelle. Having the forethought to take advantage of the opportunity presented to you is a good lesson to all of us. Your stories are so easy to read and addicting. You have the reader's attention right from the beginning and keep it throughout. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Your story is so fascinating, Rachelle. Having the forethought to take advantage of the opportunity presented to you is a good lesson to all of us. Your stories are so easy to read and addicting. You have the reader's attention right from the beginning and keep it throughout. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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24chas, you always write the sweetest reviews and capture exactly what I'm hoping to convey. Thank you for yet another to add to my trove. xo
Comment from Debra White
Hi Rachelle :)
When opportunity knock on your door, you have to welcome it!
I loved reading about how you became to teach piano and voice. It sounds as though it came at the perfect time, when your creativity was about to be somewhat compromised.
An enjoyable and uplifting read.
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Hi Rachelle :)
When opportunity knock on your door, you have to welcome it!
I loved reading about how you became to teach piano and voice. It sounds as though it came at the perfect time, when your creativity was about to be somewhat compromised.
An enjoyable and uplifting read.
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Yes, in fact I was thinking of you as I was editing this last night and knew that YOU, creative teacher that you are, would understand that part best of all.
Thanks for this lovely review. xo
Comment from JudyE
So interesting to read of your metamorphis from dance teacher to voice and piano teacher. I have enjoyed following your story.
I picked up a few points. Ignore those that don't sit well.
I humored her with a smile and a pleasant laugh and said, "Alright, thanks!" and went on my way. - there are three 'and's' here. How about something like 'I humored her with a smile and a pleasant laugh before saying, "Alright, thanks!" as I went on my way.'
But before I even reached the parking lot, I knew what had just happened: That was Opportunity knocking. - should 'That' be lower case? I'm not sure.
The semester before summer camp had begun, I'd sensed a change in the way the Powers That Be in the At the JCC were dealing with teachers. - Maybe hyphenate 'Powers-That-Be'.
'in the At'- should that be 'in the way'?
Our creativity was being squelched more and more, and we were being 'advised' constantly by non-educators on how to run our classrooms more efficiently. - perhaps 'we were constantly being 'advised'....
Nine three-year-old at a time - plural 'olds'
ditto for twelve four- and five-year olds per class - hyphen between 'year' and 'olds'
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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So interesting to read of your metamorphis from dance teacher to voice and piano teacher. I have enjoyed following your story.
I picked up a few points. Ignore those that don't sit well.
I humored her with a smile and a pleasant laugh and said, "Alright, thanks!" and went on my way. - there are three 'and's' here. How about something like 'I humored her with a smile and a pleasant laugh before saying, "Alright, thanks!" as I went on my way.'
But before I even reached the parking lot, I knew what had just happened: That was Opportunity knocking. - should 'That' be lower case? I'm not sure.
The semester before summer camp had begun, I'd sensed a change in the way the Powers That Be in the At the JCC were dealing with teachers. - Maybe hyphenate 'Powers-That-Be'.
'in the At'- should that be 'in the way'?
Our creativity was being squelched more and more, and we were being 'advised' constantly by non-educators on how to run our classrooms more efficiently. - perhaps 'we were constantly being 'advised'....
Nine three-year-old at a time - plural 'olds'
ditto for twelve four- and five-year olds per class - hyphen between 'year' and 'olds'
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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You're so good at these, Judy. You ALWAYS help my writing to be its best. Thank you!!!
Comment from susand3022
Hi Rachelle, I do know what you mean about opportunity knocking! Several years ago I went to work with disabled adults and realized I found my calling... of sorts. Working with people with disabilities. Not necessarily adults though... I didn't necessarily like the establishment and got really frustrated with it. I realized home care was the way to go. I got my CNA license and went for it. After looking forever I found an agency that would take a person with no CNA experience and put me in a position with a child. (The mother actually found me and sent me to the agency so they didn't have any real choice!) I loved this job and this kid for four years. I had the best time... then my body started falling apart and hasn't stopped. I've been recuperating for the better part of a year, now... after sitting on my butt for 9 months... I can get ready to get back to work! Finally!!! Something to do!!! My son had a college tour the other night... I'm still so sore every time I get up I hobble like I've just had a 3-day ride on a horse! It may take a bit! lol
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Hi Rachelle, I do know what you mean about opportunity knocking! Several years ago I went to work with disabled adults and realized I found my calling... of sorts. Working with people with disabilities. Not necessarily adults though... I didn't necessarily like the establishment and got really frustrated with it. I realized home care was the way to go. I got my CNA license and went for it. After looking forever I found an agency that would take a person with no CNA experience and put me in a position with a child. (The mother actually found me and sent me to the agency so they didn't have any real choice!) I loved this job and this kid for four years. I had the best time... then my body started falling apart and hasn't stopped. I've been recuperating for the better part of a year, now... after sitting on my butt for 9 months... I can get ready to get back to work! Finally!!! Something to do!!! My son had a college tour the other night... I'm still so sore every time I get up I hobble like I've just had a 3-day ride on a horse! It may take a bit! lol
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I'm glad you found work that brought you so much joy, Susan, though, of course, I am sorry to read that your body hasn't been very cooperative. Hopefully, that is changing now.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! Dance, voice, and musical instrument. You do it all. Must be fun to have the talent to entertain. I always wished I could sing, but I wasn't gifted with the right mechanics, and I play keyboard just passably. Forget dancing... no sense of rhythm at all. My child was the opposite of me...she had it all, but she takes after her dad. :)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Wow! Dance, voice, and musical instrument. You do it all. Must be fun to have the talent to entertain. I always wished I could sing, but I wasn't gifted with the right mechanics, and I play keyboard just passably. Forget dancing... no sense of rhythm at all. My child was the opposite of me...she had it all, but she takes after her dad. :)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Well, but without people like you, in the audience, Phyllis, who are we in creative and performing arts playing TO? We totally need you! It's a symbiotic relationship.
Thanks for the delightful review.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
I keep tuning in for the next read and the next. I am enjoying these lessons you share, Rachelle. They are really interesting.
Keep it up! I'll keep on reading.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I keep tuning in for the next read and the next. I am enjoying these lessons you share, Rachelle. They are really interesting.
Keep it up! I'll keep on reading.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Omigosh! I LOVE your reviews, Sandra. You always say exactly what I hope people are thinking when they read what I've posted. xo
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It's always a pleasure, my dear!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a wonderfully written and inspiring story. When God closes a door, he opens a window. I find it wonderful you went to there homes where they were comfortable. Thanks for sharing this, my friend~Debbie
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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This is a wonderfully written and inspiring story. When God closes a door, he opens a window. I find it wonderful you went to there homes where they were comfortable. Thanks for sharing this, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Debbie. I do it still, actually. Only now I have seventy-three students a week! But I still love it every day, so that's what's important.
I appreciate your lovely review. xo
Comment from Tedd Turton
Thanks for giving us another great post.I find myself anticipating your chapters now with great excitement...so enjoyable.
Just one little typo thingy...You wrote: "I put my put down" I think you put your foot in it that time. LOL ð???
As always, the very Best to you,
Tedd Turton
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thanks for giving us another great post.I find myself anticipating your chapters now with great excitement...so enjoyable.
Just one little typo thingy...You wrote: "I put my put down" I think you put your foot in it that time. LOL ð???
As always, the very Best to you,
Tedd Turton
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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HAHAHAH!! That's funny. Thank you SO much for catching that, Tedd! Thank you for having my back. I appreciate it.
And thanks for this terrific review. You know how to end a night on a perfect, well, NOTE. (Sorry - the pun was a bonus, not intentional!) xo