Perennials of War
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Comment from Artasylum
I agree with your thought on Zachery... his violence would come in a more insidious way. Great job Barbara and good luck on your changes. Thanks so much for the read. Yours, diana
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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I agree with your thought on Zachery... his violence would come in a more insidious way. Great job Barbara and good luck on your changes. Thanks so much for the read. Yours, diana
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
At least Shana is not a gold digger after everything she can get. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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At least Shana is not a gold digger after everything she can get. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the generous review.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from judiverse
Excellent work in this chapter. Anderson is recuperating after being wounded. Sarah's been through a lot, and now she has to worry about Anderson. The part about bringing along the clothes Anderson had bought for Shana is excellent. it shows his generosity and his affection for her. She's still worried about accepting them, but is looks like she will. She understands it was an act of kindness on his part. Now there's the question of whether the penthouse might be safer. I'm beginning to wonder if the Russian has some inside help, as he seems too much in touch with what's going on. judi
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Excellent work in this chapter. Anderson is recuperating after being wounded. Sarah's been through a lot, and now she has to worry about Anderson. The part about bringing along the clothes Anderson had bought for Shana is excellent. it shows his generosity and his affection for her. She's still worried about accepting them, but is looks like she will. She understands it was an act of kindness on his part. Now there's the question of whether the penthouse might be safer. I'm beginning to wonder if the Russian has some inside help, as he seems too much in touch with what's going on. judi
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. Great work on your novel. judi
Comment from royowen
The sheer stress of worry that Anderson feels, that of Anderson worrying about Shana's safety, and Shana worrying that she nothing but a burden to Anderson, and the painting, which is circumstantial, for some reason, Kuztetsov, still wasn'ts to kill people, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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The sheer stress of worry that Anderson feels, that of Anderson worrying about Shana's safety, and Shana worrying that she nothing but a burden to Anderson, and the painting, which is circumstantial, for some reason, Kuztetsov, still wasn'ts to kill people, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome Barbara
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow! You certainly have a way with carrying a complete scene with nearly all dialogue -- how delightful! The action flows so very nicely on the lips of the characters __
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Wow! You certainly have a way with carrying a complete scene with nearly all dialogue -- how delightful! The action flows so very nicely on the lips of the characters __
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Very good. Even someone having not read previous chapters will find this interesting. Word flow and pacing are excellent. The dialogue is spot on. I like all the threads that permeate the story. Makes me want to continue reading. Excellent.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Very good. Even someone having not read previous chapters will find this interesting. Word flow and pacing are excellent. The dialogue is spot on. I like all the threads that permeate the story. Makes me want to continue reading. Excellent.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
H Barbara, I liked this chapter. Also I think Zachary is as firm as can be expected. Had he attacked he would've been arrested for insult against a policeman. A pretty serious offence. So it's as well he didn't. I still think it's about time that Shana gets a bit more assertive. Something must surely happen soon. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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H Barbara, I liked this chapter. Also I think Zachary is as firm as can be expected. Had he attacked he would've been arrested for insult against a policeman. A pretty serious offence. So it's as well he didn't. I still think it's about time that Shana gets a bit more assertive. Something must surely happen soon. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Shana does grow a lot, I promise. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Things do get complicated wherever they go, but I can understand why Jeff wanted the to stay at the penthouse, it was so much easier to have guarded with the right men. Well, what will happen next? Poor Shana is going crazy with all this happening around her, it's not what she's been used to, but I suspect it will all end well. I'm still enjoying this story so much! Sandra xxxx
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Things do get complicated wherever they go, but I can understand why Jeff wanted the to stay at the penthouse, it was so much easier to have guarded with the right men. Well, what will happen next? Poor Shana is going crazy with all this happening around her, it's not what she's been used to, but I suspect it will all end well. I'm still enjoying this story so much! Sandra xxxx
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.