Perennials of War
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Poor Shana, she can't say anything without it being twisted, lol, she is just like me, and I blush, at my age too! This is a lovely part, I was really interested in the Jewish religion, I didn't realise there were three types. And the part about Jesus not being the Son of God, that was really interesting. I also loved the picture you decided to use. Perfect. Finding the right picture is the hardest part of posting, I find. Well done, another great chapter, Barbara. :) Sandra xxx
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Poor Shana, she can't say anything without it being twisted, lol, she is just like me, and I blush, at my age too! This is a lovely part, I was really interested in the Jewish religion, I didn't realise there were three types. And the part about Jesus not being the Son of God, that was really interesting. I also loved the picture you decided to use. Perfect. Finding the right picture is the hardest part of posting, I find. Well done, another great chapter, Barbara. :) Sandra xxx
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the continuation and I'm out of sixes so a virtual one will have to do. I liked the lesson on the three different classifications of Judaism as well as the humor between Shana, Anderson and Michael. I can't believe the Angel Bay property may be too small to accommodate the security team needed to protect Shana. Well done!
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
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Good morning, Barbara
Enjoyed the continuation and I'm out of sixes so a virtual one will have to do. I liked the lesson on the three different classifications of Judaism as well as the humor between Shana, Anderson and Michael. I can't believe the Angel Bay property may be too small to accommodate the security team needed to protect Shana. Well done!
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 14-May-2018
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LOL I appreciate virtual sixes as much as the others. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bob cullen
I'm back after a period away from Fanstory. It's sad to discover so many familiar names missing but even better to see even more of the very good writer's still here. The name Wilkey falls among the list of the good.
Barbara, your work never disappoints. It is always a delight to read your postings.
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I'm back after a period away from Fanstory. It's sad to discover so many familiar names missing but even better to see even more of the very good writer's still here. The name Wilkey falls among the list of the good.
Barbara, your work never disappoints. It is always a delight to read your postings.
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THANK YOU. You just made my day. Welcome back.
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
this piece was rich with detail and imagery, the characters and dialogue were strong and believable, it was interesting and a good read.
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this piece was rich with detail and imagery, the characters and dialogue were strong and believable, it was interesting and a good read.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Katya
I've been enjoying these chapters as they come out. I find them well-written and interesting, with good dialogue and characterization. So all that goes for this one too!
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I've been enjoying these chapters as they come out. I find them well-written and interesting, with good dialogue and characterization. So all that goes for this one too!
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Texans are used to having a wee bit of living space, say a million or two hectares. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Texans are used to having a wee bit of living space, say a million or two hectares. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 13-May-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Mastery
Good chapter, Barbara. Your presentation to Mother's Day was very nice of you. lsolotsof good information on the Jewish faith.
One suggestion:""What's the Torah?" Michael faced Shana." this mwould sound better and flow better this way: "Michael faced Shana. "What'sthe Torah?"
Happy Mother's Day. Bob
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Good chapter, Barbara. Your presentation to Mother's Day was very nice of you. lsolotsof good information on the Jewish faith.
One suggestion:""What's the Torah?" Michael faced Shana." this mwould sound better and flow better this way: "Michael faced Shana. "What'sthe Torah?"
Happy Mother's Day. Bob
Comment Written 13-May-2018
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I agree. I will make that correction. Thank you.
Comment from apky
You did a wonderful job with the familial scenes, creating the right atmosphere all round. I also liked the extra information on the Jewish religion, wish Michael putting his foot in it and Shana calmly explaining away. That's the sort of writing I adore - writing that gives me something unique to broaden my general knowledge on foreign cultures or politics or even the culinary.
Brillaint!
and has twenty square feet. ~ did you mean twenty THOUSAND square feet?
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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You did a wonderful job with the familial scenes, creating the right atmosphere all round. I also liked the extra information on the Jewish religion, wish Michael putting his foot in it and Shana calmly explaining away. That's the sort of writing I adore - writing that gives me something unique to broaden my general knowledge on foreign cultures or politics or even the culinary.
Brillaint!
and has twenty square feet. ~ did you mean twenty THOUSAND square feet?
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Yes, LOL I can't believe I did that. I will fix right now. Thank you.
Comment from judiverse
This is great. Michael is very direct in asking Shana to explain Judaism, and so she does. She makes things more casual when she says that he's like her father. How Anderson could part with the gorgeous New York penthouse is hard to imagine. He's looking to spend most of his time in Texas. Shana's remark about being willing to share a run is funny, and everyone picks up on it. Anderson brings up the subject of getting full custody of Emily, but it's agreed that the time wasn't right to discuss it. Anderson is making lots of decisions. Great development and characterization in this chapter. judi
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This is great. Michael is very direct in asking Shana to explain Judaism, and so she does. She makes things more casual when she says that he's like her father. How Anderson could part with the gorgeous New York penthouse is hard to imagine. He's looking to spend most of his time in Texas. Shana's remark about being willing to share a run is funny, and everyone picks up on it. Anderson brings up the subject of getting full custody of Emily, but it's agreed that the time wasn't right to discuss it. Anderson is making lots of decisions. Great development and characterization in this chapter. judi
Comment Written 13-May-2018
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Thank, you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. Great story, and likeable characters. judi
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing another fine written chapter. And who knows, I might learn something about the beliefs of the Jewish religion as I keep reading your story. Great job. :-)
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Thanks for sharing another fine written chapter. And who knows, I might learn something about the beliefs of the Jewish religion as I keep reading your story. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 13-May-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.