Perennials of War
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Comment from apky
I'm glad Shana and Anderson are making some progress in their personal relationship to each other. You wrote that very convincingly.
Apart from the small correction I made below, there were no spags or anything else to look into. The story is getting stronger.
Excellent writing.
He recovered(re-covered her; this will differentiate it from the word recover) her.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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I'm glad Shana and Anderson are making some progress in their personal relationship to each other. You wrote that very convincingly.
Apart from the small correction I made below, there were no spags or anything else to look into. The story is getting stronger.
Excellent writing.
He recovered(re-covered her; this will differentiate it from the word recover) her.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Duh! I'll make that correction. Thank you for the catch. I can't believe I did that.
Comment from Rasmine
Good image, Barbara, :)
I like this chapter, but it seems you talk about the nightmare for a few paragraphs. But that is okay. They are going to get together aren't they? :P
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Good image, Barbara, :)
I like this chapter, but it seems you talk about the nightmare for a few paragraphs. But that is okay. They are going to get together aren't they? :P
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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I think maybe they will. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Zue65
This post maybe short but it sure packs in some scenes that have aroused the curiosity of the readers, enough for the readers to wait and look forward with excitement on what will happen next in the succeeding post. Thanks for sharing.
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This post maybe short but it sure packs in some scenes that have aroused the curiosity of the readers, enough for the readers to wait and look forward with excitement on what will happen next in the succeeding post. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Barbara,
A fine contuation here. Well-written and on point. Everything moving things forward. nice development in Shana with the nightmares and a little self-analysis of Anderson as well.
Good stuff
G
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Hi Barbara,
A fine contuation here. Well-written and on point. Everything moving things forward. nice development in Shana with the nightmares and a little self-analysis of Anderson as well.
Good stuff
G
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Nightmares are the subconscious conversing with the conscious. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
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Nightmares are the subconscious conversing with the conscious. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This in continuation speaks nightmares, there is a nice catch in the beginning, good plot development, climax, realistic dialogues and characters, curious ending. DR ALCREATOR
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This in continuation speaks nightmares, there is a nice catch in the beginning, good plot development, climax, realistic dialogues and characters, curious ending. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Shana seems to be gaining trust in Anderson. She wanted him to stay after her nightmare. No wonder she's been having nightmares, with what she's had happening to her. I don't think Shana has anything to answer to. Her father has been overly anxious about her, and it seems more concern about how things will look than concern for Shana, the person. She's able to handle things herself. I'd like to see her tell her father that. She must be getting tired of his attitude. After all, she's an adult with a job and not dependent on him. Excellent chapter. Glad to see Shana is definitely softening toward Anderson.. Great story, and definitely worth 6 stars. judi
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Shana seems to be gaining trust in Anderson. She wanted him to stay after her nightmare. No wonder she's been having nightmares, with what she's had happening to her. I don't think Shana has anything to answer to. Her father has been overly anxious about her, and it seems more concern about how things will look than concern for Shana, the person. She's able to handle things herself. I'd like to see her tell her father that. She must be getting tired of his attitude. After all, she's an adult with a job and not dependent on him. Excellent chapter. Glad to see Shana is definitely softening toward Anderson.. Great story, and definitely worth 6 stars. judi
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thank you. Shana is much tougher than she seems. We'll see that in the future.
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Hi, Barbara. You're welcome. I'm sure she is tougher than she seems, but her father has tried to any sense of independence. judi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, Barbara, that was a tender moment between them, but Drew was the perfect gentleman, as we knew he would be. I can quite understand why she would have those nightmares. There was a lady on our Sky News this morning who was talking about her experience in the one of the camps, she was 8 years old and witnessed her mother being shot and slung into a ditch with loads of other women. She still remembered it as clearly as if it had just happened. It was so sad to watch her try to tell her story and not cry. I was, and it didn't happen to me. Well done, my friend, you did a brilliant job writing this. xx Sandra xx
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Aww, Barbara, that was a tender moment between them, but Drew was the perfect gentleman, as we knew he would be. I can quite understand why she would have those nightmares. There was a lady on our Sky News this morning who was talking about her experience in the one of the camps, she was 8 years old and witnessed her mother being shot and slung into a ditch with loads of other women. She still remembered it as clearly as if it had just happened. It was so sad to watch her try to tell her story and not cry. I was, and it didn't happen to me. Well done, my friend, you did a brilliant job writing this. xx Sandra xx
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thank you for understanding. I'm afraid some of my reviews are going to be that Shana is too weak. We'll see.
Comment from Sankey
Wow! Top chapter. Some revelations coming out now. Good work so emotional and strong. can't wait to see where this is going. Romance getting closer I would say. Curious to know how he converts or something, hehe.
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Wow! Top chapter. Some revelations coming out now. Good work so emotional and strong. can't wait to see where this is going. Romance getting closer I would say. Curious to know how he converts or something, hehe.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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You're right. Romance is getting closer. Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
What is Anderson up to trying to figure out what Shana's night mare are ( very mysterious I say.)
This part got to me when Anderson was telling Philip-- Quote, Duh! Because the penthouse's sound proof, dummy.
So how did Anderson know that Shana was screaming?
Gert
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Hello Barb
What is Anderson up to trying to figure out what Shana's night mare are ( very mysterious I say.)
This part got to me when Anderson was telling Philip-- Quote, Duh! Because the penthouse's sound proof, dummy.
So how did Anderson know that Shana was screaming?
Gert
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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They are in a condo, not in the penthouse. He heard her and wondered why he didn't hear her before. Thank you for the kind review.
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Okay not the pent house it was the condo
Smiles
Gert