Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Chapter Dreizehn part zwei"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
24 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So the men are watching our little group. They must know why they are nosing around, then. What is so special about that painting? The thieves could save themselves a lot of grief if they just gave it back to its rightful owner. Why ask for trouble? Oh... so you have a STORY. Of course. LOL! :)
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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So the men are watching our little group. They must know why they are nosing around, then. What is so special about that painting? The thieves could save themselves a lot of grief if they just gave it back to its rightful owner. Why ask for trouble? Oh... so you have a STORY. Of course. LOL! :)
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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LOL, I'll give you a small hint, the bad guys need THAT painting for a reason. Thank you for the kind review.
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Aha! I wonder what it could be.
Comment from Curly Girly
Hi, Barbara. I enjoyed reading this tense chapter. I get the feeling that something big is about to happen to Jeff and Anderson as they are being watched.
I'm not sure if it was intentional, but this phrase seemed stilted:
"Very good choices. I'll immediately bring the drinks."
"Very good choices. I'll bring your drinks."
Nicole
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Hi, Barbara. I enjoyed reading this tense chapter. I get the feeling that something big is about to happen to Jeff and Anderson as they are being watched.
I'm not sure if it was intentional, but this phrase seemed stilted:
"Very good choices. I'll immediately bring the drinks."
"Very good choices. I'll bring your drinks."
Nicole
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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DUH I will make that correction. Thank you for the catch.. I could say English isn't his first language, but honestly, it was an oversight.
Comment from BOO ghost
Nice artwork up there! Character list is always much appreciated and very good idea. Oh, a Russian tea room. Lets pick a favorite paragraph, so many to choose from.Prose is entertaining and held my interest well. "The Beluga Gold, Golden Osetra for an appetizer, and a pitcher of ice water with lemon." Anderson glanced at his two friends. "Sound all right?" After they answered, he looked back at the menu. "I'll need more time for the entree."
Good luck with this book! BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Nice artwork up there! Character list is always much appreciated and very good idea. Oh, a Russian tea room. Lets pick a favorite paragraph, so many to choose from.Prose is entertaining and held my interest well. "The Beluga Gold, Golden Osetra for an appetizer, and a pitcher of ice water with lemon." Anderson glanced at his two friends. "Sound all right?" After they answered, he looked back at the menu. "I'll need more time for the entree."
Good luck with this book! BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
I'm reading more into this than I expect will happen, but does make me question where it is going. We will dine on elegancy. Good one Barb.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I'm reading more into this than I expect will happen, but does make me question where it is going. We will dine on elegancy. Good one Barb.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Anderson is trying to make Ivan talk to him. Let's see if he does? Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written again you built the scene very well with the waiter and the choosing of the menu , I wonder who those people are they have moved close for a reason look forward to the next instalment I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Hello my friend this is well written again you built the scene very well with the waiter and the choosing of the menu , I wonder who those people are they have moved close for a reason look forward to the next instalment I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from apky
You once more left it a t as dangler. This time I found no nits and the writing was excellent. I enjoyed the "gangster feel" of the post, the urgency and the tension that you built, keying up the good guys versus the bad, although I have reservation about whether the good guys are all good.
Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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You once more left it a t as dangler. This time I found no nits and the writing was excellent. I enjoyed the "gangster feel" of the post, the urgency and the tension that you built, keying up the good guys versus the bad, although I have reservation about whether the good guys are all good.
Well done.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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LOL I wonder how good they are myself. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
I liked this subtle build-up to what is coming next. Anderson is certainly a cool man, who seems to know what he is doing. The idea of messing with the Russian Mob is scary stuff, but I believe he can hold his own when under pressure. Nice work with this one. As always, I anxiously wait for the next post.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I liked this subtle build-up to what is coming next. Anderson is certainly a cool man, who seems to know what he is doing. The idea of messing with the Russian Mob is scary stuff, but I believe he can hold his own when under pressure. Nice work with this one. As always, I anxiously wait for the next post.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging words.
Comment from Ulla
This sounds as a beauty of a restaurant and the food makes my mouth watering. Surly that will bring the guy out they want. A difficult situation they're in.Can't wait to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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This sounds as a beauty of a restaurant and the food makes my mouth watering. Surly that will bring the guy out they want. A difficult situation they're in.Can't wait to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging words.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think Anderson is having his wish granted, he has attracted some heavy attention. Let's hope he can manage it, not that I have any doubts that he can. I'm really looking forward to reading the next part. Will Kuznetsov make an appearance? I'll have to wait and see. Well done, Barbara, another well-written part. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I think Anderson is having his wish granted, he has attracted some heavy attention. Let's hope he can manage it, not that I have any doubts that he can. I'm really looking forward to reading the next part. Will Kuznetsov make an appearance? I'll have to wait and see. Well done, Barbara, another well-written part. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from c_lucas
I would be confident that all are armed and are members in good standing in the Russian Mafia. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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I would be confident that all are armed and are members in good standing in the Russian Mafia. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome.