Perennials of War
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Wow, that should be enough to get him custody of his daughter! Get her out of there quick! So, more excitement end this chapter, the Jews just might have something that will tell Anderson what the Russians are really after! Excellent chapter again, I loved the bit about the syrup over Romeo's face! LOL. Typical child. :) Sandra xx
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Wow, that should be enough to get him custody of his daughter! Get her out of there quick! So, more excitement end this chapter, the Jews just might have something that will tell Anderson what the Russians are really after! Excellent chapter again, I loved the bit about the syrup over Romeo's face! LOL. Typical child. :) Sandra xx
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dweigt
Another excellent post. You continue to advance the story and add complications, which is a good thing. Nothing jumped out as needing correction. My only concerns is whether we will be getting out of the apartment soon, and is there too much talking about food?
Looking forward to more.
Keep writing!
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Another excellent post. You continue to advance the story and add complications, which is a good thing. Nothing jumped out as needing correction. My only concerns is whether we will be getting out of the apartment soon, and is there too much talking about food?
Looking forward to more.
Keep writing!
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
"I'm sure you handled it with class." Anderson shook his head. "Did you make her pancakes?"
"What do you think?"
"You did. You're already spoiling her rotten."
She waved her hands above her head and continued walking. "Don't I always?" She paused and turned. "By the way, Romeo needs a bath. Emily shared her breakfast and got him syrupy." She laughed. ' This made me smile. You write as always, charmingly and engagingly. Very nice work Barbara well done kind rgeards meia :)
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"I'm sure you handled it with class." Anderson shook his head. "Did you make her pancakes?"
"What do you think?"
"You did. You're already spoiling her rotten."
She waved her hands above her head and continued walking. "Don't I always?" She paused and turned. "By the way, Romeo needs a bath. Emily shared her breakfast and got him syrupy." She laughed. ' This made me smile. You write as always, charmingly and engagingly. Very nice work Barbara well done kind rgeards meia :)
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A well penned chapter, Barbara, moving the story along successfully.
Shana and Emily are getting on well enough. Anderson hopes to get
custody of his daughter.
I wonder what the two Jewish men want to talk to him about???
Blessings,
Margaret
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A well penned chapter, Barbara, moving the story along successfully.
Shana and Emily are getting on well enough. Anderson hopes to get
custody of his daughter.
I wonder what the two Jewish men want to talk to him about???
Blessings,
Margaret
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I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
You have done a great job with this chapter. We have a great deal more information about the ex-wife, and why Anderson needs to get custody of his daughter. I like that Shana is getting along with Emily.
I wonder what will happen with the new arrivals,
~patty~
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You have done a great job with this chapter. We have a great deal more information about the ex-wife, and why Anderson needs to get custody of his daughter. I like that Shana is getting along with Emily.
I wonder what will happen with the new arrivals,
~patty~
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Excellent continuation. The flow was great. Your character's banter, the relaxed atmosphere belies the the serious threat from the Russian Kuznetsov. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
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Good morning, Barbara
Excellent continuation. The flow was great. Your character's banter, the relaxed atmosphere belies the the serious threat from the Russian Kuznetsov. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
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I appreciate the kind review..
Comment from bookishfabler
What a beautiful face. I grew up with Shepards. MY favorite breed. Well, I love all dogs, and cats too. Well, animals. Now I have Chihuahua mixes. They are the best.
"By the way, Romeo needs a bath. Emily shared her breakfast and got him syrupy." She laughed. (I have been debating how to bath our dogs in the RV. Small shower. One day hubby got a little ketchup on Brutus, so I had no choice but to bath them. It actually worked better than at the house with the big tub. No where to run. LOL.)
Another great chapter. Nothing negative to say, only possitive. Hope you had a nice weekend
hugs HEidi
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What a beautiful face. I grew up with Shepards. MY favorite breed. Well, I love all dogs, and cats too. Well, animals. Now I have Chihuahua mixes. They are the best.
"By the way, Romeo needs a bath. Emily shared her breakfast and got him syrupy." She laughed. (I have been debating how to bath our dogs in the RV. Small shower. One day hubby got a little ketchup on Brutus, so I had no choice but to bath them. It actually worked better than at the house with the big tub. No where to run. LOL.)
Another great chapter. Nothing negative to say, only possitive. Hope you had a nice weekend
hugs HEidi
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Your review caused me to giggle. Thank you for the kind review.
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That is good. I was hoping for a giggle or two. But it is true.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I've never heard of a dog eating pancakes? it then again we don't eat pancakes for breakfast here, a fun story and I wish you luck for the future, love Dolly x
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I've never heard of a dog eating pancakes? it then again we don't eat pancakes for breakfast here, a fun story and I wish you luck for the future, love Dolly x
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curly Girly
Hi, Barbara. This chapter read well, but I spotted one spacing error here:
because of the noise and it was in the early hours of the morning. When the police arrived they found drug [*close space here]
paraphernalia.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
PS: I loved the image!
Nicole
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Hi, Barbara. This chapter read well, but I spotted one spacing error here:
because of the noise and it was in the early hours of the morning. When the police arrived they found drug [*close space here]
paraphernalia.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
PS: I loved the image!
Nicole
Comment Written 29-May-2017
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I tried FS says there isn't enough space. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good chapter. So maybe all they had to do was ask! LOL! Funny they never thought of that. He might just want it off his hands so she doesn't pursue a plan to get it back another way and find out enough to expose him.
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Good chapter. So maybe all they had to do was ask! LOL! Funny they never thought of that. He might just want it off his hands so she doesn't pursue a plan to get it back another way and find out enough to expose him.
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I appreciate your kind review.