Perennials of War
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37 total reviews
Comment from kriver
Hi Barbara,
This is a good chapter
I enjoy the dogs so much
When I had my dogs I would
talk to them all the time
They always answered too
they would bark cock their head
and try very hard to understand
what was being said.
Overall it is a good chapter
Best regards, K River
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi Barbara,
This is a good chapter
I enjoy the dogs so much
When I had my dogs I would
talk to them all the time
They always answered too
they would bark cock their head
and try very hard to understand
what was being said.
Overall it is a good chapter
Best regards, K River
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Anderson leaned back. "I don't believe we have enough information to make a decision. That's why we need to find out exactly what Morozov is up to and who he's connected to. I'm hoping either Jeff or Jeremy will be able to fill in the blanks, and then we can decide if continuing to get the painting back is worth it or not."
Philip answered his phone and after listening a few moments, he asked, "Drew, it's Jeff. Something has come up and can't meet at 10:00. He wants to know if he can meet with us now."
Anderson nodded and then said to Shana, "Maybe we'll get an answer in a few minutes." As Jane walked into the room he said, "Please let Helen know Jeff will be here for breakfast."
As always you write with flair and verve Barbara, pacy and exciting write as always you have me wanting to read more, you are a fabulous writer, well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Anderson leaned back. "I don't believe we have enough information to make a decision. That's why we need to find out exactly what Morozov is up to and who he's connected to. I'm hoping either Jeff or Jeremy will be able to fill in the blanks, and then we can decide if continuing to get the painting back is worth it or not."
Philip answered his phone and after listening a few moments, he asked, "Drew, it's Jeff. Something has come up and can't meet at 10:00. He wants to know if he can meet with us now."
Anderson nodded and then said to Shana, "Maybe we'll get an answer in a few minutes." As Jane walked into the room he said, "Please let Helen know Jeff will be here for breakfast."
As always you write with flair and verve Barbara, pacy and exciting write as always you have me wanting to read more, you are a fabulous writer, well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Sasha
I accidentally deleted this, this morning and just remembered to look it up in your portfolio. Nice work with this. Excellent dialogue and I like how the story is moving along. I do like how Drew speaks with Shana, he is a true gentleman.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I accidentally deleted this, this morning and just remembered to look it up in your portfolio. Nice work with this. Excellent dialogue and I like how the story is moving along. I do like how Drew speaks with Shana, he is a true gentleman.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. Thank you for the time it took to look it up.
Comment from Mustang Patty
The intrigue continues to grow and I'm anxious to see what Jeff has to say. Your characters continue to capture the imagination, and keep the reader intrigued.
A nit: '...and then we can decided (decide) if continuing to...'
Looking forward to reading more,
~patty~
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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The intrigue continues to grow and I'm anxious to see what Jeff has to say. Your characters continue to capture the imagination, and keep the reader intrigued.
A nit: '...and then we can decided (decide) if continuing to...'
Looking forward to reading more,
~patty~
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I made the correction. Thank you for the catch and kind review.
Comment from royowen
I can remember arising at five in the morning in New York to do some reviewing and watch the city wake up, my second grand son would sit next to me asking what I was doing, so I received some great imagery Barbara. They haven't decided whether or not the painting is worth chasing or not, soo they have early morning breakfast with the "spoilt" dogs, well done, thanks for the memory, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I can remember arising at five in the morning in New York to do some reviewing and watch the city wake up, my second grand son would sit next to me asking what I was doing, so I received some great imagery Barbara. They haven't decided whether or not the painting is worth chasing or not, soo they have early morning breakfast with the "spoilt" dogs, well done, thanks for the memory, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I am glad you enjoyed the memory.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
I have gotten to where I like short chapters, even in the books I read, being able to find a stopping point with regularity. You might have even playing a part in my becoming that way. And also, the short chapters always leave me wanting to more, rather than how many long run-on chapters have me just wanting a resting place. Great job, and thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I have gotten to where I like short chapters, even in the books I read, being able to find a stopping point with regularity. You might have even playing a part in my becoming that way. And also, the short chapters always leave me wanting to more, rather than how many long run-on chapters have me just wanting a resting place. Great job, and thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Regular length chapters don't make it on FS. People want the reviewing points. In my original manuscript the chapters are normal. That's why I number the way I do. It's for me . Thank you for dropping by.
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I agree.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb,
I like reading your new novel for a couple reasons.
I like the idea of having the dogs it to me gives a let me say a homey feeling,especially,Romeo.
Plus you have a special way to make me want to read your next chapter
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Hello Barb,
I like reading your new novel for a couple reasons.
I like the idea of having the dogs it to me gives a let me say a homey feeling,especially,Romeo.
Plus you have a special way to make me want to read your next chapter
Gert
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great new chapter which is nice and domestic. I have a few suggestions.
she found a lounge chair close enough the edge she could watch... = so she could watch/enabling her to watch and sat = and sat down.
Shana's eyes widened and placed her hand - as she placed her hand on her chest
Love the story and I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Hi Barbara, this is a great new chapter which is nice and domestic. I have a few suggestions.
she found a lounge chair close enough the edge she could watch... = so she could watch/enabling her to watch and sat = and sat down.
Shana's eyes widened and placed her hand - as she placed her hand on her chest
Love the story and I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I made the changes. Thank you for the kind reviewing.
Comment from light
Shana getting more comfortable in Anderson 's home, and certainly enjoying watching the city awake in the early morning. Still looking for the connection between Morozov and the Russian mafia. Intrigue intensifying. Good chapter.
Elaine
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Shana getting more comfortable in Anderson 's home, and certainly enjoying watching the city awake in the early morning. Still looking for the connection between Morozov and the Russian mafia. Intrigue intensifying. Good chapter.
Elaine
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm always disappointed when I reach the end of your parts, Barbara, I want them to go on and on and ... This is such a good story, I'm really enjoying it. Now, what will Jeff have to tell us, let's hope it's something really useful and they can start getting some idea of what it is the Russians' are after. Superb, my friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I'm always disappointed when I reach the end of your parts, Barbara, I want them to go on and on and ... This is such a good story, I'm really enjoying it. Now, what will Jeff have to tell us, let's hope it's something really useful and they can start getting some idea of what it is the Russians' are after. Superb, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I'm waiting for Jeff to tell me what he knows myself. LOL Thank you for the kind review.