Perennials of War
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Comment from GWinterwin
Good chapter in your book Perinnals of war. Good picture to make it complete. You did good on keeping the reader wondering what was coming next. A person could learn a lot about the mafia possibly by reading this book.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Good chapter in your book Perinnals of war. Good picture to make it complete. You did good on keeping the reader wondering what was coming next. A person could learn a lot about the mafia possibly by reading this book.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Her name is Emily." Anderson set his jaw. "Brownies and banana splits are not a healthy breakfast. Helen will ensure Emily eats healthy food."
With this you had me hooked,I have so enjoyed reading your work, well done very kind regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Her name is Emily." Anderson set his jaw. "Brownies and banana splits are not a healthy breakfast. Helen will ensure Emily eats healthy food."
With this you had me hooked,I have so enjoyed reading your work, well done very kind regards Meia :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi Barbara,
As probably know, I am coming into this midcourse, so I am not sure about everyone's role. But as I read on, it should become more clear.
I like the more contemporary stories like this ... a thriller with a touch of romance - or so it appears to me. Sounds like there's a bunch of intrigue about Shana's painting and it involves the Russian Mafia. As I said, I think it will be clearer as I read on. Your title (in English - Chapter Five, Part One) tells me there's been quite a bit written up to this part. I'll try to get caught up the best I can.
As always, your writing is good and paints good visual images.
Best to you,
Alan
PS: Hope your hubby is okay
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Hi Barbara,
As probably know, I am coming into this midcourse, so I am not sure about everyone's role. But as I read on, it should become more clear.
I like the more contemporary stories like this ... a thriller with a touch of romance - or so it appears to me. Sounds like there's a bunch of intrigue about Shana's painting and it involves the Russian Mafia. As I said, I think it will be clearer as I read on. Your title (in English - Chapter Five, Part One) tells me there's been quite a bit written up to this part. I'll try to get caught up the best I can.
As always, your writing is good and paints good visual images.
Best to you,
Alan
PS: Hope your hubby is okay
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad you're on board. I value your input.
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My pleasure!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this was another fine chapter and the dialogue flows very natural. It's great Jane got Shana some things to tidy her over. I'm looking forward to what;s next. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Hi Barbara, this was another fine chapter and the dialogue flows very natural. It's great Jane got Shana some things to tidy her over. I'm looking forward to what;s next. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from crybry67
Hi, this is the first chapter I've read, and I found it to be very well written. The dialogue flows easily, characters are relatable and well defined. Blessings.... Christy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Hi, this is the first chapter I've read, and I found it to be very well written. The dialogue flows easily, characters are relatable and well defined. Blessings.... Christy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from wondertwin
This chapter was enjoyable to read. I think you do a great job transitioning between writing in 1st person stance and 2nd person. Well done. Blessings, AmyJo
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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This chapter was enjoyable to read. I think you do a great job transitioning between writing in 1st person stance and 2nd person. Well done. Blessings, AmyJo
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
And the questions continue to far outweigh the clues. Shana has a point about no painting being worth all this BUT my guess is that the painting is worth much more than anyone thinks at this point. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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And the questions continue to far outweigh the clues. Shana has a point about no painting being worth all this BUT my guess is that the painting is worth much more than anyone thinks at this point. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
That was interesting information about different
markings when to do with the Russian Mafia.
How thoughtful of Phillip to get a few things for Shana,
to tide her over.
The chapter moves the story only -
Margaret
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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That was interesting information about different
markings when to do with the Russian Mafia.
How thoughtful of Phillip to get a few things for Shana,
to tide her over.
The chapter moves the story only -
Margaret
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes you have done very well again my friend the story is moving along nicely keeping all readers entertained I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Yes you have done very well again my friend the story is moving along nicely keeping all readers entertained I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is getting more intriguing with each episode, Barbara. There has to be more than the painting that have these people involved. I am hoping to pick up some clues myself, so goodness knows what Shana is feeling. Another exciting part, my friend. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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This is getting more intriguing with each episode, Barbara. There has to be more than the painting that have these people involved. I am hoping to pick up some clues myself, so goodness knows what Shana is feeling. Another exciting part, my friend. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.