Thoughts are Like Cars
Coralling ideas for poems14 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I think the constant thoughts that rush through my head are there making their plans, trying to understand the various thoughts and maladies of society, beautifully written Tina, and yes, like buzzing flies or cars, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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I think the constant thoughts that rush through my head are there making their plans, trying to understand the various thoughts and maladies of society, beautifully written Tina, and yes, like buzzing flies or cars, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Yes, for sure, plans and thoughts are annoying but busy sometimes for noble reasons. Thanks, Roy!
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Yes, for sure, plans and thoughts are annoying but busy sometimes for noble reasons. Thanks, Roy!
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Well done
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love the way you turned your thoughts into cars! It's such a creative metaphor. And I totally get the image of traffic in your mind. The line "Traffic on roadways I see in my brain" really made me smile because it paints such a clear picture of how messy things can get in our heads sometimes. It's a fun poem and full of energy - just like the thoughts you've described! Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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I love the way you turned your thoughts into cars! It's such a creative metaphor. And I totally get the image of traffic in your mind. The line "Traffic on roadways I see in my brain" really made me smile because it paints such a clear picture of how messy things can get in our heads sometimes. It's a fun poem and full of energy - just like the thoughts you've described! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much! Your time and responses are encouraging! I appreciate them both !
Tina
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I completely understand. I suffer from ADD and my brain never stops, so many ideas run through it constantly. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It's very good.
and cars,as you know, can go fast. (space after the comma)
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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I completely understand. I suffer from ADD and my brain never stops, so many ideas run through it constantly. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. It's very good.
and cars,as you know, can go fast. (space after the comma)
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thanks for the correction as I don't want to be sloppy in punctuation when I used to teach:)
Me too...thoughts racing too fast! I appreciate your thoughts on thoughts:)
Have a great day!
Tina
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is lovely to have lots of idead racing though our heads Tina and it seems that your muse is dancing away with lots of ideas. I enjoyed your inventive post, love Dolly x x x
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It is lovely to have lots of idead racing though our heads Tina and it seems that your muse is dancing away with lots of ideas. I enjoyed your inventive post, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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That means a lot coming from you because you're very inventive with lots of ideas! Thank you much!
Tina
