I wrote the songs
A poem..55 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I wrote the songs
by royowen
I knew you were a musician but I didn't know you had a family band. Thank you for sharing your story. I know God, family, and music are important to you and we get to read your beautiful poems. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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I wrote the songs
by royowen
I knew you were a musician but I didn't know you had a family band. Thank you for sharing your story. I know God, family, and music are important to you and we get to read your beautiful poems. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks Gypsy , for your super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from RGstar
A musical feel to this one Roy, and with the history behind makes this even more giving.
Music is the language of the world, and needs no deciphering, appearing in every walk of life.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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A musical feel to this one Roy, and with the history behind makes this even more giving.
Music is the language of the world, and needs no deciphering, appearing in every walk of life.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks RG, for your super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Laurie Holding
Hey now, my first 6-star of the week! This is wonderful fun, and the backstory only enhances the poem/song itself. Great work, and I wish you continued success!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Hey now, my first 6-star of the week! This is wonderful fun, and the backstory only enhances the poem/song itself. Great work, and I wish you continued success!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks Laurie, for your super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a pity that you song is not accompanied with some music here Roy and we would really be entertained then, do you put any of your songs on Youtube? Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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It is a pity that you song is not accompanied with some music here Roy and we would really be entertained then, do you put any of your songs on Youtube? Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks Dolly, for your super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Kayte Ray
This has outstanding flow and rhythm and tells the complete story for the reader to follow. You have done a wonderful job putting this one together. I also like your presentation. It is beautiful to look at, easy to read and over all enjoyable.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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This has outstanding flow and rhythm and tells the complete story for the reader to follow. You have done a wonderful job putting this one together. I also like your presentation. It is beautiful to look at, easy to read and over all enjoyable.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks Kayne, for your super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from strandregs
Wowza Roy
Such endowment, you are blessed.
This poem is fabulous.
'Sadly' I could never drink more than one glass of wine or two beers.
And could never smoke.
Such a bore.
The topic and rhyming made me happy. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Wowza Roy
Such endowment, you are blessed.
This poem is fabulous.
'Sadly' I could never drink more than one glass of wine or two beers.
And could never smoke.
Such a bore.
The topic and rhyming made me happy. :-))Z.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, for your super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Bridge
A lovely poem . I have always wondered about writing lyrics for a song and how difficult it must be. Working with a lot of constraints is challenging and satisfying but difficult. Very well w6
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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A lovely poem . I have always wondered about writing lyrics for a song and how difficult it must be. Working with a lot of constraints is challenging and satisfying but difficult. Very well w6
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for your super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Versch
You must have an interesting life when you were young. You can still write songs now. The poems you write could be turned into songs. There must be many in your portfolio that would make wonderful songs. Blessings Ver
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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You must have an interesting life when you were young. You can still write songs now. The poems you write could be turned into songs. There must be many in your portfolio that would make wonderful songs. Blessings Ver
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for these splendid comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
Your life testimony in your notes is as compelling as the poem, and yes, being musical and using a metronome would certainly help with the beat or rhythm and metre of a poem. Very well written!
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Your life testimony in your notes is as compelling as the poem, and yes, being musical and using a metronome would certainly help with the beat or rhythm and metre of a poem. Very well written!
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thanks Wendy for these marvellous comments and an uplifting review, blessings Roy
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem's title reminded me of The Captain and Tenille and also Barry Manilow singing 'I Write The Songs'.
(I'm pleased my Troubadour Tom poem triggered this - thank you for mentioning it.)
I can feel the beat of the metronome in your poem - that is a handy hint for other writers to establish the beat to develop its musicality. Words are indeed your sword, to cut open your spiritual experience to share with others.
Your backstory is truly inspirational... that the Lord's entry into your life turned you in the right direction (180 degrees) clearly saved you from your bad ways to become an 'instrument' in more ways then one! And such a talented family - what a blessing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Your poem's title reminded me of The Captain and Tenille and also Barry Manilow singing 'I Write The Songs'.
(I'm pleased my Troubadour Tom poem triggered this - thank you for mentioning it.)
I can feel the beat of the metronome in your poem - that is a handy hint for other writers to establish the beat to develop its musicality. Words are indeed your sword, to cut open your spiritual experience to share with others.
Your backstory is truly inspirational... that the Lord's entry into your life turned you in the right direction (180 degrees) clearly saved you from your bad ways to become an 'instrument' in more ways then one! And such a talented family - what a blessing.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thanks Jenny,for these marvellous comments and an uplifting review, blessings Roy