Tucker - (Part -1)
An offer, too good to refuse . . . ?68 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well told story with good character development for both men. It seems Tuck doesn't want to be connected in any way to the Mob, of which Farnsworth seems to be a part. It seems it came very close to violence a couple of times by both men. It seems in the last part that Tuck may take the job.
Maybe it can be a book of short stories with Tuck solving mysteries of some kind.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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This is a well told story with good character development for both men. It seems Tuck doesn't want to be connected in any way to the Mob, of which Farnsworth seems to be a part. It seems it came very close to violence a couple of times by both men. It seems in the last part that Tuck may take the job.
Maybe it can be a book of short stories with Tuck solving mysteries of some kind.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Joan, for taking time to read more of my overexaggerated foolishness. My way of entertaining myself, and hopefully a few readers. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated! Ric
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Ric,
You are most kindly welcome on all accounts. It is a good way to entertain yourself and your readers.
Joan
Comment from Susan Newell
Ric,
I see why this made Story of the Month. It was delightfully told and one has to admire the depth of Tucker's integrity. Nice twist at the end.
I noticed a couple places where I thought a little editing would help.
Sue
On the verge of blowing his cork, but somehow, he managed to keep the raging blood from boiling -- Better as "cork, somehow he managed"
"What can I do to persuade you for one of those favors, I'll pay handsomely if you can help me?" -- Better as "favors? I'll . . . help me."
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Ric,
I see why this made Story of the Month. It was delightfully told and one has to admire the depth of Tucker's integrity. Nice twist at the end.
I noticed a couple places where I thought a little editing would help.
Sue
On the verge of blowing his cork, but somehow, he managed to keep the raging blood from boiling -- Better as "cork, somehow he managed"
"What can I do to persuade you for one of those favors, I'll pay handsomely if you can help me?" -- Better as "favors? I'll . . . help me."
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Sue, for your extra-special six-star review. I'm honored when you take time to read my over-the-top foolishness. And I'm happy to make those suggested changes to tighten up the sentences. I can't thank you enough for the stars, help, and encouragement. I appreciate YOU!
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It's my pleasure to read quality writing!
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An old hack who didn't know a noun from a verb when I came to Fanstory, your short sentence with "pleasure" and "quality" has put a lump in my throat and wet my eyes. But don't tell anyone, you'll blow my tough guy image. I appreciate YOU!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I love, love LOVED your work on this! I am so pleased that it won story of the month it is hugely deserving! I loved it and your characters are so well written, so brilliantly fleshed out...I absorbed and delighted in every bit of this very descriptive and fascinating read and will certainly back for more! I LOVE anything about the Southern parts of the USA. If you look at my backlogged of work you may have noticed! Once again brave on this brilliant write kindest regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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I love, love LOVED your work on this! I am so pleased that it won story of the month it is hugely deserving! I loved it and your characters are so well written, so brilliantly fleshed out...I absorbed and delighted in every bit of this very descriptive and fascinating read and will certainly back for more! I LOVE anything about the Southern parts of the USA. If you look at my backlogged of work you may have noticed! Once again brave on this brilliant write kindest regards Meia :)
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Meia, for your extra-special six-star review. The idea of plot drilled into our brains, I'm the weirdo who thinks that without characters, plots are a waste of time. Outlining plots definitely makes writing easier, but it limits us to seven formulaic stiff-cardboard structures. Of course, many writers being naturally dry, overtaught, and programed by rules, they hate my over-exaggerated, comic book descriptions, meant to lighten the seriousness and add fun and entertainment. I'm so glad you get it! Thank you ma'am, as a true Southern boy would say. You've made my day, my week . . . oh, hell, and probably my month. Without encouraging reviews like yours, I would have given up writing a long time ago. I appreciate YOU!
Comment from Ronni
Hi Ric,
Quite a story here Ric. Sounds like a perfect intro for this character,
Sam Tucker. From start to finish, Tucker is let loose to define himself
as the raw edge no nonsense kind of commando/Rambo era breed.
Through your visceral imagery and both subtle and broadly revved
up descriptions, it is a story worthy of the character's personality
and peculiarities noting, and your brilliant writing enticing for
more, and hopefully will follow soon.
Sorry for missing the promotion time on this; and noting you
did win the Story Of Month on it, still very glad for you! Congrats!
Keep up the great writing!
Best wishes, Ronni
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Hi Ric,
Quite a story here Ric. Sounds like a perfect intro for this character,
Sam Tucker. From start to finish, Tucker is let loose to define himself
as the raw edge no nonsense kind of commando/Rambo era breed.
Through your visceral imagery and both subtle and broadly revved
up descriptions, it is a story worthy of the character's personality
and peculiarities noting, and your brilliant writing enticing for
more, and hopefully will follow soon.
Sorry for missing the promotion time on this; and noting you
did win the Story Of Month on it, still very glad for you! Congrats!
Keep up the great writing!
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Ronni, for your kind words and generous review. I appreciate you taking time to read another of my over-the-top stories, with no reward. I don't care about contests, but it does make me happy to think a few might have enjoyed my foolishness. Thanks for the encouragement, and it's always nice to see your name pop up!
The best to YOU, Ric
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Next time I will try not to be the last one over the fence to review....psstt hope my slip wasn't showing as I belatedly
went over this one....LOL.
Still neat to see you a winner
on the winner announcement!
Ronni
Comment from rockinm76233
congratulations on your win. Enjoyed your story.But because I HAVE to write more words before it will take my comments. "GOOD JOB." ON WINNING STORY OF THE MONTH ETC.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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congratulations on your win. Enjoyed your story.But because I HAVE to write more words before it will take my comments. "GOOD JOB." ON WINNING STORY OF THE MONTH ETC.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Yes, isn't it a pain in the butt that you finish saying what you have to say, and then, you're told you haven't written enough. LOL! Thank you so much, RockinM, for lack of knowing another name, for your extra-special six-star review. I don't care much about contests, but it's a happy day when I receive such kind words and encouragement from those I enjoy reading every day. I appreciate YOU and the great review!
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you are most deserving. you are welcome.
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Thank YOU! I just hope my foolishness puts a smile on a few faces. :-)
Comment from papa55mike
Wow, what's not to love. I love the smart butt attitude Tuck possesses. It's much like most people out at three in the morning. This storyline would be an excellent book. Congrats on winning story of the month. You ain't nothing but rolling!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Wow, what's not to love. I love the smart butt attitude Tuck possesses. It's much like most people out at three in the morning. This storyline would be an excellent book. Congrats on winning story of the month. You ain't nothing but rolling!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Papa Mike, for your extra-special six-star review. If it weren't for encouraging reviews like this, I would have given up on writing a long time ago. You've made my week! I appreciate YOU and your stories!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Congratulations, Ric, on this achievement. Well deserved. I believe it served as a great Prologue to a book. Go for it. I love it. I'm sorry I didn't see this sooner.
Ralf
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Congratulations, Ric, on this achievement. Well deserved. I believe it served as a great Prologue to a book. Go for it. I love it. I'm sorry I didn't see this sooner.
Ralf
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Ralf, for your extra-special six-star review. Your kind words and encouragement are what keeps this old hack scratching. LOL. I appreciate YOU!
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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 A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review. |
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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I'm happy a few people enjoyed my foolishness, like most everything I write. I just set out to put a smile on some one's face. Like this giant grin this seven stars has put on mine. Thanks!
Comment from Ben Colder
Good write. I never found anything out of pocket, so to speak. It made sense to me, and it can easily fir into today's society. I think well done Ric.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Good write. I never found anything out of pocket, so to speak. It made sense to me, and it can easily fir into today's society. I think well done Ric.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Ben Colder, for your kind words and generous review. I thought you or Wendy were sure to win the contest, and truthfully wish you had. I just write my foolish stories in hopes of putting a smile on someone's face. Contests are not really my thing. Congratulations on your fine entry and ribbon! I appreciate YOU!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
It is my humble opinion that this story should definitely be an introduction to Samuel Tucker. I love this fictional character ... a man with guts, confidence in himself without arrogance or ego, knowledgeable in regards to corruptness and evil mindsets, and pleasant until you really piss him off.
That last line hangs there making me want to read much, much more.
I fell in love with your strong, solid imagery and the intricate details of emotions. You are very, very deserving of six stars.
Gale
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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It is my humble opinion that this story should definitely be an introduction to Samuel Tucker. I love this fictional character ... a man with guts, confidence in himself without arrogance or ego, knowledgeable in regards to corruptness and evil mindsets, and pleasant until you really piss him off.
That last line hangs there making me want to read much, much more.
I fell in love with your strong, solid imagery and the intricate details of emotions. You are very, very deserving of six stars.
Gale
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Gale, for your extra-special six-star review. There is more truth to these characters than I care to admit. I'm glad you liked my story and I'm excited you would like to read more. You have made my week with your kind words and encouraging review. Much appreciated!
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And, I meant every word. You had my vote. Congratulations on your win!
Gale
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Thank you so much, Gale. I sure appreciate your vote, which was the deciding factor. Since there was only one deciding. LOL. Thanks a million!
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LOL :) Very deserving and my pleasure.