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A Vanilla-Flavored Favor

Accepting Ice Cream from a Stranger

37 total reviews 
Comment from estory
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I don't remember your book, but it sounds interesting and I wish you the best of luck with it. Sometimes I think the hard part is promoting it and getting it to circulate. The more you put in the more you will get out of it. estory

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Exactly! And this is why I'm not expecting great things with this publisher, who is young and ambitious, but I'm sure is lacking connections.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
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Congratulations! I wish I had your courage and knowledge to try such a feat. And in real paper, too--wow. May you have the very best of luck in your new career!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Nancy, thank you so much for your good wishes.
reply by NANCY V. FORREST on 20-Aug-2021

    :-)


Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Congratulations, you certainly deserve this for your talent and interest in helping others. I wish I was qualified so all I can do is give you my best wishes for success.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    Thank you, Mary. I have been helped by so many. And a lot that you describe as talent is merely the reflection of that help.
Comment from J.R. Michael
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What wonderful and exciting event going on with your work. I would have loved to have helped in the process but it seems like you already have your stuff figured out. Good luck with everything.

P.s. love the self-deprecation

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
    So kind of you to weigh in, J.R. And with a six, too! You know what Nietzsche says about self-deprecation. A worm scrunches up and makes itself smaller so it won't get stepped on. Or words to that effect.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is wonderful. I'm so happy for you. I could do this and would love to, but if you have people you know better and who have read this before, I would understand.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Awwww, Carol. thank you. It's not a question of people I know better or who have read it originally, but I already have the three I asked for. And more than that would make it difficult for me to correspond with. If this works out, I will have Volume 2 and 3 following. You would be such an asset to have on my team!
reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 19-Aug-2021
    You're a really good writer. So glad you have your 3 so quickly.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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CONGRATULATIONS!!!! Jay, I am so over the moon for you! You really deserved this and I'm so pleased you have been picked up by a publisher. A rarity these days. I bought a kindle copy of your books and also wrote a review on Amazon. I'm glad you have your Beta readers, I just checked. I nearly missed this, too! You don't need me now, but I would have been happy to help you out. Good luck with the publishers, I am so very happy for you, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    You are so sweet, Sandra. That's a pity. You would have made such a valuable beta reader, too. I will have Volume 2 and 3 coming right on this one's tail, so if you're still interested then, I'll put your name down with the rest who missed the call. Danggit!
Comment from tfawcus
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I haven't had much time to look in my inbox recently and have only just come upon this. First of all, good luck with the publishing venture. I see you have a full complement of beta readers, but I shall be interested in purchasing a copy of the book when it comes out.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Ah, Tony, you are such a friend. Thank you. You can better believe you'll hear me boasting about the publication as soon as the contract is signed and the book delivered.
Comment from justafan
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I am not qualified to edit anything but if you wouldn't mind, I would like to read The Trining. Your writing style has always interested me.

This little Vanilla write is a prime example of why I love what you write.

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Missy, if you would like me to send you the attachment for Volume one (I same one I'm sending to my Beta readers), PM me your email address. Or another way is to have you dig into my portfolio here (though I've made big improvements on FS's posts).
reply by justafan on 19-Aug-2021
    mj291952@gmail.com
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Jay Squires,
I went through the whole piece of General Non-Fiction from top to bottom, and found it very captivating.
What I like most are these lines which depict your SELF-CONFIDENCE in an interesting way:
"And most of you who've read my stuff will vouch for the fact that while Jay may lack genius, the kid has a pretty solid grasp of grammar and punctuation. So, I'll have a fairly clean MS to hand over."
LAUDABLE Attitude!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Many thanks to you, RP. I've always been touched by your kindness and loyalty for what I've written.
reply by RPSaxena on 21-Aug-2021
    Jay Squires, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Jay:

I am so excited for you. I'm sorry I just saw this as I would have loved to do this for you. I had no doubt that you would receive numerous offers of help from your fellow Fanstorians. Overall, they are a great group. Can't wait until the final product is ready for purchase.

jan

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2021
    Oh, Jan, you'd better believe I'll be strutting around FS like a Banty Rooster just as soon as the book is published. Thank you so much for your kind words.