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Football Surprise

A contest entry

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Comment from lyenochka
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I have heard that nurses and phlebotomists practice on oranges but never heard of injecting vodka. That streaking must have helped one or the other. Thanks for the fun story!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    LOL Helen you are so welcome, I guess it was a bigger thing back home in Canada.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Alie. I can understand and appreciate this flash fiction because I knew about both injecting vodka into oranges and streaking. I wonder if people knew what streaking was when they read the piece?? I did. Did you get any inquiries about that term. If so, you may want to put a footnote to explain it. I worked in a restaurant with big picture windows overlooking a duck pond. It was a very ta-ta place. Invariably around dusk the streakers ran past the window to the shock of diners. Great job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Marilyn, only one reviewer didn't understand about streakers, those were the good times.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
This short story tells of eating spiked oranges at a game.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Thank you Sharon for reading, reviewing and your great comments and the good luck wishes.
Comment from Susan Larson
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Cute story for the 100 word flash fiction contest. We did that once with oranges in the dorm back in the 60's. Not because we were into drinking. It was just for the sake of getting away with something!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Susan for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. Yea for the 60's and 70's. I agree that it wasn't because we were into drinking but more so getting away with it. (smile)
Comment from Shirley McLain
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How ingenious to think of filling the oranges with vodka. I would have not thought of that as a way to get alcohol into a game. Excellent job and good luck with the contest. Shirley

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Shirley for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Janet Foor
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Vodka and orange juice - my kind of football game. I guess I would prefer Peach Schnapps but that might be too girly for a football player. :))))

Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much for reading, reviewing Janet, you kind comments were wonderful.
Comment from royowen
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What a good idea to slow down one's opponent, and as a former drunk, I can tell you that it was a great way to slow me down, one loses all sense of proportion. As does a football player be slowed down. This is hilarious, Well done great entry, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Roy for reading and reviewing and your great comments.
reply by royowen on 15-Feb-2020
    Well done
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Crazy college kids do crazy things ... vodka may or may not be involved! ;) :) LOL! ;) Thanx for sharing such 'flashback' and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Yvette for reading and reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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It sounds like someone or more than one had indulged to much. What will they think when they sober up with pictures floating around the internet? You could never live that down. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Jeffrey for reading and reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from rspoet
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Your story made sense up to the last line
with the students enjoying the vodka laced oranges.
Didn't quite get:
"Oh no, someone had been enjoying, so streaking was game."
Otherwise a good story.
Good luck in the contest
Robert


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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Robert for reading and reviewing and your great comments. Someone(s) had oranges earlier and decided to streak across the game field.