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Valuable Lesson

Seeing my Dad help was important

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Comment from jenintorre
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This is A great 1-6-1 poem and excellent entry for the competition. It really does tell a complete story. I think it's a winner. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thank you for the read and the encouraging comments.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Really hard to tell a story in six words. In this case, the image helps some. From the entries I've read so far, yours comes the closest. But don't take that to the bank.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    My grandfather didn't believe in banks so in this case neither will I.
    Thanks for the read and some encouragement.