Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Forget the pass and live in the present. I don't want to forgive them either. Well thought out and clearly written. Creative. Great storytelling. Nice artwork choice for presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019

How many generations ago did they live, and I still can?t forgive them? Thank you for your kind praise. Rod

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

And interesting take on the Fall. Surely, Adam and Eve were defective.
they partook of the forbidden fruit. But they were supposed to be created in God's image, right? So, surely, Adam and Eve were defective.
An interesting story.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Their story is perhaps the most intriguing in the Old Testament because, as you said they were defective right from the start. Thank you for sharing my ?story.?

Comment from Mary Jane Y

Good

Good use of the six words. Thankfully there is no truth in that statement!
Never forgive is a harsh statement! One that should only be said if you never need forgiveness in your own life.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

You are undoubtedly right as FORGIVENESS is what most of us seek at one time or another. Many thanks for sharing my ?story.?